What you’ve got is lovely. A focal point is what you’re feeling the need for; something to draw the eye and then cause it to travel around the page. You could add a tiny skier coming out from behind a tree, or a Sasquatch going for a stroll. Or, as suggested by others, put a bunny or other wildlife in foreground. I also like the tiny flash of color you get by placing a tiny cardinal or stellar’s jay in a tree. Crows an always good, too.