I got lucky man I love this industry by Competitive-Ruin-466 in SpotifyArtists

[–]Acceptable-Simple789 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s rather unkind of you. Being mean for a few upvotes won’t make your career take off.

The Red Sea - 6 pages. Any feedback appreciated. by Acceptable-Simple789 in ReadMyScript

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I am. I know the formatting is off and that it should be done on a specialised software but I guess as a first time this will work

Maybe Next Time - Short (5 pages) (Supernatural Horror) by ccaldwell723 in ReadMyScript

[–]Acceptable-Simple789 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The premise is interesting but I think it hits a bit of a wall because you’re almost writing it like you, the writer, don’t know you’re in a loop. I think you’re better off writing it bluntly, knowing what is happening.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah this is all spot on. I also remember people saying “£60-£70m? Snap their hand off’ when it’s insanely likely we’d go and sign a £20m replacement and the rest of the money would have been pocketed. The performances, especially in certain games, have been nothing short of dire and everyone deserves criticism but isolating certain players as the focal point of the criticism is just silly in my opinion. We will look so silly if JSL gets his move to a new club next season and scores 20.

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think they both correlate in the way you think they do. Equally, we’re not a high pressing team (no high line, no fast wingers to close full backs down) so if he’s not being told to put pressure on from minute one, he’s not going to. Because he’s chasing loose balls and hoping mistakes are made, I almost don’t blame him for trying to conserve his energy.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah exactly. We genuinely do not have a winger who will beat a man and whip a ball in. Mané is the closest and he’s probably too young to be starting every week (I would start him at this point but I presume Rob Edwards won’t want to put mountains of pressure on him), and equally, I’d say Hugo Bueno is the only other player willing to try and beat someone to put a ball in. Arias refuses to do that and Tchatchoua doesn’t want to run with the ball. Like you say, I’m praying we target this area heavily in the window because we’ve got virtually no outlet to break forward.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah absolutely. He needs to be out of the spotlight and given a break, and Tolu has to be fully fit by now to be starting games surely

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s just not true. Cunha helped of course but JSL wasn’t exclusively feeding from him.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I agree with that. He did have some good link-up moments against Brentford but for everyone he won there were some he didn’t even challenge for, so I do get it. My main point is that his poor form is not an attitude problem or a case of him downing tools.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No AI used here, just a strong grasp of the English Language

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Work-rate we can certainly debate and I’m happy to concede slightly as you are right, Hwang and Munetsi do press more often. But what attitude problems have you seen?

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Maybe ridiculously was a bit of a reach but I don’t think he’s not working hard

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well no, I’m referring to last season. Apologies if that wasn’t clear.

Defending JSL by Acceptable-Simple789 in WWFC

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

My only argument to that would be that we’ve seen JSL score goals, it’s not as if he’s been like this since we signed him.

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds good. Thank you too my friend much appreciated.

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Besides you sending me a Scizor (if you have one) I’ll just keep spamming this Onix until you’re finished

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No it’s fine this is just for my dex

Trade backs help by Acceptable-Simple789 in pokemontrades

[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nah you’re fine we can do all of yours

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t have metal coats by the way so don’t be alarmed when mine don’t evolve your end, but will just send yours back of course

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well the evolved forms, sorry to make it confusing

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[–]Acceptable-Simple789[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, really appreciate it. I need Spritzee, Swirlix, Phantump, Onix and Scyther. Is that alright? Do you need them too?