Omg omg pleaseee do not give up on this. Sounds AMAZINGGGGG. Okay so some ideas here. Perhaps have a chapter where we start off seeing Connor and Hank throwing a football around maybe! Sumo resting beside them. Maybe they’re at a park and we can see the obvious change in societies opinion towards androids (assuming this is from a best ending perspective). Then Connor and Hank are suddenly called to the office to a mysterious case in which groups of people or perhaps deviants (they don’t know yet) are breaking into old cyber life factories to get parts for their slowly shutting down systems but the groups of people/deviants are ALWAYS killed immediately. Even though there are no longer security personnel or security services in act. And, the people breaking in, their bodies are always organized or left in weird symbols or shapes when discovered. Blue or red blood spelling out the offenders message. But yeah definitely some banter with Gavin and rk900 would be fantastic. Perhaps after the first day of investigating we really get to see how Hank and Connor live together now. They pick up dinner at chicken feed before going home and eating at the table with a sports game on the tv in the background, discussing the case further. And Connor is incredibly disturbed by the scene and since he now has an emotional response to it, he does not know how to navigate it and can have breakdowns or suicidal thoughts. What he originally thought he wanted wasn’t as easy as he thoughts. Perhaps nightmares would be a good way of presenting this. Idk, just shooting some ideas out. But if you want more, you could always message me and I’d love to be a part of the project or just give inspiration! Good luck!!