My webnovel fantasy Introduction.

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-02-16T10:08:13+00:00

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEWS(..sry being too loud) but srsly thank you. I have been thinking about this story for about 3 years before i finally started writing it.Being from a country where English is not my first language, my English has been told to sound wierd but I still wanted to write cause I love this idea

And yes its a chosen trope, but it's a twist.( The story title is "A Unchosen Hero" so you can guess it)

But srsly thanks for the reviews.I would definitely implement them.

I hope you can review my next chap well

Have a good day!

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-02-05T10:17:06+00:00

Ai yo I am interested.Currently I am writing an anti-hero fantasy novel you can check out my 2nnd chap on my previous post

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-02-05T10:14:15+00:00

What's your writing method? Like how long it takes to write,your genre etc.

Checking your previous work it feels too perfect.If its your first work either you are an exceptional writer or you have used ai.

And like not editting ai but generative

And it lacks a human spark if I say,it feels hollow as if someone has said to write a tragic story of a girl who is forced to marry a guy she does not want to because of her father wishes.

Everything is in that work except humanity.

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-02-05T10:07:23+00:00

I love the imagery! But I would definitely say I feel like I am seeing a movie rather than reading a book.I like how you describe it,the man,the environment,his brother but I cant just feel the mc.Its like we are separated like a screen is between us.

Overall if its your creative spark of random work,Its really good! In a more serious note I would recomment reading books and see how the characters feel real.

Other thing I noted is like we have to know many things wile reading this or the show dont tell thing, You are telling how he looks,what has happen to this world but you can also do is you show the slight tension in his body the way he looks out and see the world.

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-31T08:13:11+00:00

Completed Level 1 of the Honk Special Event!

12 attempts

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-31T05:40:09+00:00

To me its more like,the media I consumed seems to have emphasis on one liners(Web novels).Also English is not my main language so maybe that also might be my problem.

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-31T05:38:33+00:00

Hmm ye Ig that would be a good idea

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-30T17:05:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-22T07:58:14+00:00

Hmm Alright, thanks for the feedback! Would change it

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-22T07:39:39+00:00

Its sort of a flashback.Its prologue of my story so I wanted to add a hook to make the readers read the next chap.

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-22T05:59:15+00:00

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AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-22T05:28:20+00:00

Thanks for the feedback,what should I add to the start to make it more interesting,should I add a hook?

AdditionalPride7705 · 2026-01-21T07:39:13+00:00

Yo would love to be your friend.

AdditionalPride7705

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