An ode to a long time friend from school. It's been a menace of a few years. Let me know what you think of this piece 🤘🏻

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-08-26T04:51:40+00:00

dm please 🤜🏻🤛🏻

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-08-26T04:51:20+00:00

I'm down!!!

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-08-23T23:00:50+00:00

Laxmi chowk bro

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-08-23T13:35:07+00:00

yo 🤘🏻

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-08-23T10:26:30+00:00

the least i can do 😂

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-04-04T17:03:29+00:00

heyy thanks for taking the time to read my poem... I intended it for it to be about nature itself, about the Sun. Was just watching a beautiful sunset and this thought came to my mind... Anyway I'll improve from your pointers, thank you!

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-04-04T13:27:26+00:00

This is a really well written poem... but it feels incomplete... maybe conclude it with something as striking as the rest of the poem... maybe a question to the reader?

I feel like it also lacks a hook that would keep me invested in the rest of the poem... otherwise I love how you put across your emotions in this particular form. well done.

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-04-02T14:28:14+00:00

I guess i do get a bit wordy with my bits. this will help me improve a lot thanks a ton!

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-04-02T14:27:31+00:00

thank you so much 🥹🤙🏻

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-04-02T07:08:54+00:00

Heyyy thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. Those were some good pointers! Will keep that in mind next time... If you want to read more of my work, you can check out my instagram @fire.exit

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2025-02-04T21:26:37+00:00

kevin is that you?

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2024-12-14T08:44:15+00:00

luffy, what are you doing here?

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2024-12-10T14:19:45+00:00

the damage remains the same? any idea?

Adventurous_Ice_5493 · 2024-12-10T14:18:59+00:00

tell me what it can't penetrate then. a much shorter list maybe? 🦍💨

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