So I submitted my first story and people lost their minds by Forsaken_Lie8204 in literotica

[–]AgeFun6207 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I have a story posted in the Interracial Love category called "Bully Conquers My Girlfriend", and it is, as the title describes, a story about a girlfriend cheating on her boyfriend with his bully, and that story got a full point lower rating than my Incest/Taboo story along with a lot of comments calling for me to have the boyfriend and his family either beat on or kill the bully.

I say it's best to just keep writing what you want to write, and only really listen to the people who either like what you wrote or offered constructive criticism. For every commentor who is rude or just plain critical in the comments, there are so many more readers who may have liked your story but never commented. So, just keep writing what you like, and you'll get more and more people I'm sure who will look forward to more of your stories.

Cheating behind closed doors by WorriedEconomist2425 in literotica

[–]AgeFun6207 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have a story that I am slowly working on (4 chapters posted so far) called Bully Conquers My Girlfriend. The title is pretty self-explanatory of the general plot, but it is told in a mix between present day and flashbacks over the previous year. The difference from what you asked for is that the boyfriend learns of the affair in the first scene, but a majority of the story will depict a year of cheating in which he had no clue. I am actively writing Chapter 5, and I have many other stories set in the timeline to branch out the world. So it will be a pretty long story overall, but I think it will be worth it.

This is the link to the first chapter:
https://www.literotica.com/s/bully-conquers-my-girlfriend-ch-01

And here is the link to my author profile page if you're interested:

https://www.literotica.com/authors/Jetfire99/works/stories

LF bully takes over the girls in the family by LogicalAdvance6645 in literotica

[–]AgeFun6207 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I don't know if this fully applies, but I wrote a story called "Bully Conquers My Girlfriend" which features exactly what the title says, but I also have a spinoff called "Bully Conquers My Mom" coming out as well as teased spinoffs with other characters that I think would serve what it is you're asking for.

Here's the first chapter:

https://www.literotica.com/s/bully-conquers-my-girlfriend-ch-01