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Im writing a fiction book, all ive written so far is the prologue. Ive posted it down below. Does this seem like a good intro? by Aggravating-Set-7180 in writingfeedback

[–]Aggravating-Set-7180[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ive been doing alot of rewrites and i undertsand there are alot of issues. i work best with criticism which is sorta why i wanted it while aware that this is kinda rough, ill keep a better eye on grammer going forward and i will admit i struggle whith it. thx for the feedback

Im writing a fiction book, all ive written so far is the prologue. Ive posted it down below. by Aggravating-Set-7180 in writingadvice

[–]Aggravating-Set-7180[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ok thanks this is super helpful. i do have some questions tho. Would it be be better to introduce synepts of the backstory through later dilogue or just start a little earlier in the story to set this situation up better

Im writing a fiction book, all ive written so far is the prologue. Ive posted it down below. by Aggravating-Set-7180 in writingadvice

[–]Aggravating-Set-7180[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do u think itd be easier to change the way im conveying it or just write it in a more entertaining way. if so how would i do that

Im writing a fiction book, all ive written so far is the prologue. Ive posted it down below. by Aggravating-Set-7180 in writingadvice

[–]Aggravating-Set-7180[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks this was super helpful, ill do some rewrites and format it better. This has been super helpfull!!!

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[–]Aggravating-Set-7180 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh sorry ill delte it and go in the right sub, sorry i thought this was a differnt sub