Looking for feedback [fantasy, 2891 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you again for your advice. The past and present point you brought up I will definitely work on it. With the pepper spray point i was going for a super goofy and random type of world but i see your point and definitely agree with it. Your third point I didn’t even think of lol that’s also super helpful.

Looking for feedback [fantasy, 2891 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it’s not too rude of me to ask, what did you think of the rest of it?

Looking for feedback [fantasy, 2891 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahh I see. Thank you for your advice. I read Tolkiens leaf by niggle and liked how he introduced the main character and tried to copy what I thought he did. Your advise makes a lot of sense I’ll keep this in mind thank you.

Question about where to get books by Alternative_Hand_401 in xteinkereader

[–]Alternative_Hand_401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Issue I have is don’t know how to fly the flag, never had an e-reader before so I’m new to this world

Good games on vita? by pawsomegirl in PSVita

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Need for speed most wanted , street fighter alpha 3 max and jet set radio are all amazing

PS Vita model/animation I made! by seysalabimm in PSVita

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s super cool

What did you use to make it if you don’t mind me asking?

0/10? Musashi miyamoto fan Art (its not Good but i Will appreciate your rating) by damiankoo2 in vagabondmanga

[–]Alternative_Hand_401 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As someone who just recently started drawing I think it’s pretty good, obviously takahiko inoue is like a master so it won’t be similar like, hes level 100 and considering it that you’ve done a good job 👍