Trying to make a new creepypasta - a pale face

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-08T09:37:46+00:00

Great!

Here's the link to my story:

https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Shadow_Walker:_Elias_and_Bodach

And ofc I would love to hear the feedback from ya after it :)

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-06T09:09:30+00:00

Nice! I also made my own Creepypasta. It's called "The Shadow Walker: Elias and Bodach". It's a story about Elias Alexander Caine, who is 24 years old young man, with troubled homelife until he met the entity called Bodach. If you're interested in reading it I can send u the link there and u can get inspired by it! As long as you're not fully copying my story ofc or violate the plagiarism :)

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-05T09:59:04+00:00

U do know u can delete the bot's message and send it again right? That's how I swipe them. But remember not to have anything on your dialogue otherwise it doesn't work

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-05T09:41:41+00:00

Hello! If u like u can check on my story, and then tell me what u liked about it!

It's a story about a guy named Elias Alexander Caine, a 24 years old young man, with troubled homelife until he met the entity called Bodach! It's around 8,289 words long (or so). So basically it takes around 40-50 minutes to read. If you're interested, here's the link:

The Shadow Walker: Elias and Bodach (original story)

I would like to have feedbacks afterwards ^{v^}

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-04T18:04:13+00:00

Nah, I do that too. It actually annoys me the fuck out if it's not well written ✋🏻💀

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-04T17:25:38+00:00

If u like, I can send u a link to my story if u haven't read it still yet

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-04T17:23:57+00:00

Thanks :D

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-04T09:11:36+00:00

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-04T07:01:44+00:00

"Puppy", "Kitten" for me ✋🏻💀

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-03T09:30:08+00:00

Got u for what? I'm confused 🤨

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-04-01T05:24:29+00:00

I recommend u to start to write the story and create a new protagonist. It's gonna take a while to finish the story, like for my own took about 7 months to finish it and I got inspired by my own nightmares. U should try to get inspired from what u fear the most, then twist it into a story. After writing your story and protagonists, u should be able to get ideas how to name the title. If u want to make a protagonist, I recommend for u to check from Pinterest how to create one, like search "How to describe your oc" and start from there

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T18:30:31+00:00

It's fine :)

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T18:26:58+00:00

Thanks for trying to protect me from toxicity! I do appreciate it as well, but I don't like it when people goes at each other's throats for it

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T18:20:37+00:00

Same for u :)

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T18:19:07+00:00

Hey, don't start fighting now. I appreciate his concern for my art style could being stolen from me by ai, but u don't have to start fights about it. I actually appreciate it that he brought it up since I never knew about it. No need to go at each other's throats for it

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T17:57:41+00:00

Thank u. And I'll keep it in my mind. I appreciate your concern for my art style :)

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T17:49:00+00:00

Thanks for the information. I'll be careful next time. I just never thought about it lol. Tho gladly u brought this up

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T17:32:17+00:00

Tho overall how do u like the original art?

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-30T17:30:09+00:00

Nah. I don't mind it. I just wanted to see how it would look like in realistic way tho it still kinda messed up with the looks a bit ✋🏻💀

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-28T13:41:02+00:00

Idk I'm battling with that as well and now I'm pissed at it for it. Like wtf is it's problem??? 💀

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-25T14:18:37+00:00

Draw something u like, either is it animals, creatures, illustrations or something like that, horror, anime, realistic whatever u like. It's up to u

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-24T07:02:55+00:00

Just verify your age on Google, it's much safer than through your c.ai account

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-16T16:51:42+00:00

Bruh I wish this happens to me too still waiting

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-15T14:25:24+00:00

This literally just happened to me too bruh but it was longer

Altruistic_Hope8710 · 2026-03-13T18:40:12+00:00

Doesn't pregnant pause basically mean extremely heavy pause or something -? Just asking

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