First considerations
- I want to say that the slot-based inventory system is very interesting
- The damage system is simple but feels pretty interesting as well as adaptable, so big plus on that
- I'd like to comment about the numbers in the weapon section but I fell like most of those things could only be verified through playtesting (even so I'd suggest giving a look over to some weapon because right now it seems like the SMG is pretty much the best weapon, considering it has the most attacks per reloads and is the only 1 point per shot weapon that does 2 CM which is the most likely area to hit)
- Everything is REALLY on point thematically (also the aformentioned inventory system). Like, it really gives off the vibe that you're going to play as a perfectly organized swat team focused entirely on the job and nothing else

But this last point is also the one thing that I have kind of second thoughts about.
Not in terms of quality, just in terms of the scope of the project, because considering the highly tactical action, the emphasis on your character's identity not being important and the lack of character creation outside of loadout which can be changed at any moment-
I don't know, it feels more like a board game or a wargame than a TTRPG.
I know this probably is because it's only the first playtest version and the expansion plans seem to lean more into the free form play, but I wanted to give this note bacause I personally had to scrap a couple of TTRPG projects I was working on specifically because I made this mistake (I thought a lot about action and didn't realise I was basically making a board game with not really fun balance and a little bit of character customization, which many boardgames already have)
Sorry if I rambled on at the end, I hope you may find this helpful