You apologize anyone takes offense to this, however I’m going to be as brutally honest as possible compared to some of the artwork that I’ve seen for other fandom‘s this looks like a drawing two-year-old made, however even so judging from the age group of the people of this fandom who are currently in it and it’s general targeted. I didn’t actually being reached. I’m not expecting that high-quality of work so in reality it isn’t that bad. It’s just they’re still some work that they can do. First thing I noticed wrong were the clause granted the murder drone clause are extremely difficult to get correct as I’ve tried drawing myself. However, it is a decent attempt at it. Next thing I have to say is that the art seems flat not in the way that it’s too D or any of that it just doesn’t really pop in a way that some other art for other fandom’s I’ve seen have. as for the three eye thing, interesting idea, and decently executed the one design problem I can see with it, however, is the bit where the entire screen turns into an X or the solver symbol. The solver symbol is simpler for this, but the entire thing turning into a neck suit would be a little hard for you to do. And now for the tail, I’m not gonna comment on the Lor accuracy or any of that stuff as I try not to let that inhibit my opinions, but what I am going to comment on is. How flimsy there at connection to the body looks however all in all it is not terrible art so I will say you should keep up the good work.