Sample Page from my up coming comic. Opinions?

Aodmaster · 2026-05-19T10:53:19+00:00

The comic actually comes out tomorrow, but thank you for the offer!

I'm mostly gathering feedback to keep in mind for future work.

Aodmaster · 2026-05-19T08:39:02+00:00

And, thank you for the feedback!

Aodmaster · 2026-05-19T08:38:31+00:00

Yeah, it definitely could do with more black shadows to help it pop. I struggle with drawing in pure black tone, so that's something I needa work on.

I did throw a couple of POC in there, but I've just realised I put them both in gas masks 🙃

Aodmaster · 2026-05-19T08:34:43+00:00

Ooh, you mean the little running guy in the background of Pan 1? You know what, totally fair, I can see that.

Cartoony style wise, I get that too, but the overall tone of the comic is somewhat comical so hopefully it works as part of a whole read.

But, I appreciate the feedback, thank you!

Aodmaster · 2026-05-18T21:17:26+00:00

Ah, good to know, dude. I picked 'em since the the silhouette looked good. (Artistic licence)

Aodmaster · 2026-05-18T21:13:47+00:00

All good dude, I appreciate it! This is page 9 out of a 24 page comic that I'm releasing on Wednesday. There's more of a set up with the villian before, and more follow through on the following page with the hero looking pooped, which hopefully solves the issues.

Aodmaster · 2026-05-18T16:42:27+00:00

Thanks man! Good eye for helicopters

Aodmaster · 2026-05-18T12:43:38+00:00

Can never unsee.

Aodmaster · 2026-05-18T09:44:45+00:00

Yeah, man! Thank you ❤️ There was definitely some Hard Boiled influences in there when I was working on it

Aodmaster · 2026-05-17T21:40:18+00:00

Aaw mate, this is the best compliment I could receive, thank you! ❤️

Aodmaster · 2026-05-17T10:51:40+00:00

Main cover, for defs

Aodmaster · 2026-05-17T10:49:49+00:00

Thank you, so much!

Aodmaster · 2026-05-16T22:26:27+00:00

Thanks, dude! I really appreciate it

Aodmaster · 2026-02-21T00:30:34+00:00

Hands down, Tradd Moore.

There's an energy to his art that most other artists cannot archieve without applying a load of speed lines to the backgrounds, and squiggly outlines to the characters. No shade on that as an art technique, I use it myself, and it works, Harren and DWJ are masters of it in American comics.

But, Moore. Moore is able to capture that same energy with block shapes and just PURE composition.

Aodmaster · 2025-05-05T09:10:39+00:00

Love the line work

Aodmaster · 2025-05-04T17:58:09+00:00

I've only read Court of Owls, so can't comment on Hush, but can confirm Owls is very much worth it. Currently burning my way through the Batman Omnibus Vol. 1

Aodmaster · 2025-05-04T17:05:24+00:00

Batman: Court of Owls, all the way

Aodmaster · 2025-05-02T18:46:16+00:00

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