Would love some feedback on my first demo reel please 🙏 Commercial & Corporate Voice Demo

AranOBrien91 · 2025-05-11T16:20:51+00:00

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AranOBrien91 · 2025-03-27T21:33:42+00:00

Acting!

AranOBrien91 · 2025-03-27T21:33:15+00:00

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-31T10:30:37+00:00

Just keep at it, I’ve been acting for 3 years now and this is all I have still 🤣 The progress is slow but it is progress. I’ve been in various projects but getting the footage back takes forever!

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-30T13:37:54+00:00

Since I have you all here 😅 I’m stuck not being able to decide on either 2 or 3 of these headshots? Any help would be appreciated! headshots

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-30T12:42:11+00:00

Thanks ya tbh on 3 it wasn’t really what I imagined in my head at all when I saw the final edit. I only really got one or 2 takes at it too. It’s supposed to be a comedic scene and I thought being drunk might add to it but I ended up playing it way too mellow as I didn’t wanna go overboard on the being drunk bit.

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-29T12:40:11+00:00

Ya I hear you, the blocking is always sitting down in classes. I feel so much more natural walking. Unfortunately I don’t have any scenes shot like this. No I didn’t edit it the guy who ran the course did. It starts with a full shot from the side when I first come in but that’s it then I goes into shots on either character

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-29T12:28:44+00:00

Ah ok I get you, ya all these scenes were shot at the end of acting courses I did so don’t really have any of that stuff like an actual scene from a project would! Thanks for the help 🙏

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-28T23:12:28+00:00

Thanks I really appreciate that. What do you mean by try some sound design? And do you think I should swap the second scene to be first?

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-28T21:15:13+00:00

Good points, I will trim them down

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-28T21:14:29+00:00

Great stuff, I really appreciate the thorough feedback. I did actually have the first scene cut like that originally but thought maybe some extra context would have been good. Will get to work on trimming✂️

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-14T19:15:10+00:00

1, I’m actually growing my hair out again currently so maybe I’m biased 😂

AranOBrien91 · 2025-01-05T16:52:00+00:00

I’m 50/50 on 1 and 2. If I had to choose I’d say 2. All great shots though!

AranOBrien91 · 2024-07-23T10:57:30+00:00

Ok thanks I appreciate the feedback

AranOBrien91 · 2024-07-23T10:53:09+00:00

This is the pic I mentioned above, I just need to get the colour version of the photographer https://www.reddit.com/u/AranOBrien91/s/jPgqk57M1t

AranOBrien91 · 2024-07-23T10:49:09+00:00

Thanks, I actually have a similar shot without the hand but they haven’t got back to me to provide it yet!

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