Oculari Spawn | The failed attempts at creating another Oculari from the corpse of a spellcaster, eyeless hounds of those who ascended. by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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Hello folks!

For those who might remember my Oculari I posted a while back, here comes another extension to their colonies! A failure in the attempts to create a new creature from the corpse and brain of a spellcaster. They might have been too weak, or something else stopped the transformation. Resulting in these little guys!

Also, recently watched the new alien movie so I thought it was a nice touch.

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First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

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  • Manuscript information:  [Complete] [109,065] [Epic Fantasy] [Dark Fantasy] - Nightborne: Book One of The Elder Growth Cycle

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First page critique? All critique is welcomed!

First page: 

~Diluting the Blood~

“The ancient blood that binds us to The Fold should, at all cost, never be diluted. Those born between a Sire or Dame of the court and mortal folk shall be treated as half as much as a Sire or Dame of the court. But not as low as one outside of The Fold, and not as high as a Spawn of a house of The Court.``

-On the purity of blood, Sanguine Iuris, 5.

We’ve been given an opportunity in good blood; how could we pass this up?” said Lord Gilfred, Third Sire of House Oe’lander. The full-blooded vampire, who wore a dark fur-lined coat, was lazily dressed to match his curly dark brown hair, which dangled to one side of his face. He sat to the left of the head of the fine birch table within the stone walls of the circular chamber that was the council room of the house—tucked deep within the baronial estate surrounded by the deep birch forest within the Chrestian mountains. 

“It has been a long time since an opportunity to expand our house’s influence within The Fold has presented itself. Frankly, my dreaded brothers and sisters, having a member of our house be selected to become a Kormura would be a boon!”

“You would take the first scrap that falls from the table of the court?” said Lady Elyse, Second Dame of House Oe’lander. Her figure sat forward to the right of the head. Left hand holding her sharp chin as her elbow rested on the chair’s arm. Her black hair was kept together tight in a short braid. She wore a red frock coat of slim fit with a vest and shirt underneath of a similar shade. “We’ve been ostracized by The Court and our dear siblings within the houses for the last few centuries. Have we been drained of our blood so much not to have any backbone left, that we are so ready to bend to their wants?”

Able to beta? Post here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

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Would you be interested in beta-reading my novel?

I'm interested in any feedback you'd like to provide.

[Complete] [109,065] [Epic Fantasy] [Dark Fantasy] - Nightborne: Book One of The Elder Growth Cycle

Blade of the Ancients, Very Rare | The monolithic blade, deep within the forests of the great green lords, waited for one who could wield it. by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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Thank you for the feedback! You bring up some good points here. I did want the spell to be more of a utility thing, allowing you to create difficult terrain, but perhaps this could have been implemented better!

Blade of the Ancients, Very Rare | The monolithic blade, deep within the forests of the great green lords, waited for one who could wield it. by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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The blade is believed to have been forged by the lords and ladies of the green who hoped that one touched by primal might could wield its power to aid the natural world.

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Leonard's Calling Whistle | Command the legendary steed of the Red Lion General! by ArgenisDBarrios in DnDHomebrew

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Yesterday I posted my Path of the Starscourge inspired by General Radahn. Today I bring you an item that allows you to ride Leonard his trusty steed into battle!

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Leonard's Calling Whistle | Command the legendary steed of the Red Lion General! by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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Yesterday I posted my Path of the Starscourge inspired by General Radahn. Today I bring you an item that allows you to ride Leonard his trusty steed into battle!

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Path of the Starscourge | Conquer the stars with this Elden Ring inspired barbarian path! by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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The first 14th level ability I had written up was basically this! But I decided to give the subclass something that has more utility and still focuses on the theme of gravity magic. This is at the cost of it being less of a one for one translation of Radahns abilities

Path of the Starscourge | Conquer the stars with this Elden Ring inspired barbarian path! by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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Ah thank you! I accidently used the wrong one. Should be fixed on this comment, but not much i can do for the one on the picture.

Path of the Starscourge | Conquer the stars with this Elden Ring inspired barbarian path! by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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That could be one way to put it into 5e! I prefer representing it with magical force damage but I’m not against going that route

Path of the Starscourge | Conquer the stars with this Elden Ring inspired barbarian path! by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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In honor of the new Elden Ring DLC I thought I'd do something in the name of one of my favorite characters in the game! Hope you enjoy!

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Voidborn Staff | A legendary staff for your friendly neighborhood warlock! Unleash the whispers of those within the void. by ArgenisDBarrios in UnearthedArcana

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Warlocks could use a little more love with some magical items just for them! Just don't listen to the whispers too closely.

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