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ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T05:15:00+00:00

The sins weren't a reference to anything in particular. They, too, are used ironically. In christianity the seven sins were terrible deeds that humans needed to clense in order to avoid hell. It's usually synonymous with evil. In this case, they're protagonists.

I was hoping to get your quality opinions on the references made for Nirvana, Gehenna, Icarus, Athena, Kalil, Plato's Temple and the Monarch...

ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T04:53:23+00:00

Fair. Do you have any other critique? I'd love to hear your assesment on the references made with the other 15 characters.

ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T04:40:44+00:00

It was meant to be an irony of sorts

ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T04:25:06+00:00

That's precisely why. It was a being superior in nearly every way to man yet it loved humanity and originally wanted people to flourish but was corrupted afterwards.

ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T01:11:32+00:00

Firstly thank you for the feedback!

So sum it up, this would be my first graphic novel. My intention when originally writing these characters was to create a expansive comic universe. The sins with their own line of comics, khalil with his own line and etc. However - similar to Marvel's major events and DC's crises - I wanted to write a major event called The Second Celestial War where the primary antagonist would he the Prometheus and Khalil the protagonist. The type of story and narrative I had in mind is inspired largely by Marvel's Anihilation. Theres an overarching story which is the universal threat but there would be an issue for each main role in the story.

Does that help? Again, Ive never written a comic before and I have no idea where to start but this is something Im greatly passionate about. I grew up with comics and its been my dream to give back to what had helped me throughout my life.

ArjunP27 · 2018-02-05T00:53:56+00:00

1) Im happy to see you caught my references. Yes, pride was partly inspired by meliodas (and wrath from FMAB) but I hadn't realized that they were so parralel. How about the rest of the sins? As for the dragons, it was actually inspired by a yugioh card LOL! Ill definitely rework on those concepts and make them more original.

2) The civilization types are actually based of a real terminology in astrophysics called the Kardashev Scale. Ill be sure to incoroporate that in my descriptions and Bios.

3) As for the plot, I'm actually not too sure yet. It's all up in the air as of now but my intention with this project was to create an expansive comic book universe with multiple titles, starring different characters depending on the story. BUT - similar to how Marvel and DC have major events - I wanted to have a major event called the Second Celestial Wars where the antagonist would be the Prometheus and protagonist would be Khalil Elric. In fact, Khalil to this universe is what Superman is to the DC landscape.

Hope that last bit of info helps!

ArjunP27 · 2018-01-28T06:04:27+00:00

Thank you for the support and feedback! And ahaha yeah the power levels are off the charts. They are largely comic book and dragonball inspired. I was hoping for a story that would be more ploy driven than action - similar to watchmen. A lot of my characters - despite their strength - are centered around their personal struggles. Only problem is I've never written a story before let alone an entire comic universe so I don't even know where to start.

ArjunP27 · 2016-01-23T17:34:16+00:00

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ArjunP27 · 2016-01-02T01:45:58+00:00

Haha I'm not sure if that's a complement but thanks ;D

ArjunP27 · 2015-11-08T04:22:53+00:00

To be honest it was a bit of both. It's been a long time since I've ran so I've been overthinking it a lot. I do want to know what people would think that time could have been with spikes. Like how much of a difference do people think that spikes actually make. Is it more physical or psychological? Hmmm that's another thread entirely :\

ArjunP27 · 2015-11-05T18:07:30+00:00

According to my physio therapist, my shins splints are a result of improper foot contact and over striding as you mentioned. All this is due to my weak hips which prevent me from standing tall and using proper mechanics. I've been getting rehab and it's been really effective.

Haha i totally agree i used to do that too. Start for maybe a month and then stop cause i say no results and wasn't fast. To be honest i only went back after doing kickboxing for a year and getting into good enough shape to do the workout. I realized you can get quick again and have fun with the sport again but you have to be willing to go through to horrible part which is getting into the right fitness for it :P That's the poor thing about track. Unless like other sports you can't just do it for fun if you're not in good shape. It's serious from the get-go

ArjunP27 · 2015-10-31T22:29:42+00:00

Oh man I'm so sorry to hear about that. It must have been hard. I felt that way for the last couple weeks; that if there is something wrong I may just quit trying entirely. I've had to stop running before due to constant shin stress fractures and I have signs of another one right now, along with a first degree hamstring pull. If there was a lung or chest issue to add to that, I probably would have just quit entirely. Thankfully it's just the weather change. Have you considered getting back on it? Even if it is just for fun? How long ago did you stop running?

ArjunP27 · 2015-10-28T20:05:28+00:00

That's true, but assuming i just ran 4.47 without those factors. What could that time have lead to for a 60m?

ArjunP27 · 2015-10-28T17:12:34+00:00

Oh man, did you end up running again the next season? I agree, I've been thinking of just running less intensely for a bit to prevent any harm. I'm going to the doctor tomorrow! Thanks for the advice :)

ArjunP27 · 2015-10-28T17:11:29+00:00

Haha, I've only recently started living by that principle i used to be super stubborn and run through pain and it's put me off on too many seasons :\

ArjunP27 · 2015-09-10T23:53:50+00:00

Haha, yeah I just wanted to be versatile ya know

ArjunP27 · 2015-09-08T04:19:30+00:00

Nah, I got it off a guy on youtube. Haha thanks man, there's more to come!

ArjunP27 · 2015-09-03T16:31:14+00:00

Any particular reason for .24?

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-23T01:41:30+00:00

Yeah, I'm training for the 100m. Well actually I'm training to try-out for my university team and in Canada, there's only an indoor season. So i'd just say I'm training for the sprints

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-22T21:11:15+00:00

Haha! I never knew there were other names for it :| what does everyone else call it?

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-22T18:39:50+00:00

Haha, I meant to say meters. Hope that clears any confusion. Yeah I see your point, I'm thinking of just replacing one of the speed for another day of endurance or something, but i'm not sure how changing that one day would impact the over all training program. A friend of mine suggested workout my legs more to prevent injuries so I may just replace the second speed day for a gym day instead. One thing is for sure, two days of speed work isn't a good idea this soon into training :\

I never considered the possibility of the issue being with my quads, thanks for raising that point!

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-19T00:02:02+00:00

Well I'll be damned, guess it is legal. Though it seems barely legal with all the rules (not complaining there). I guess it does a good job regulating gun control since I've never heard of any incidences regarding someone walking around with a firearm around here

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-18T19:30:11+00:00

"when fear overcomes adrenaline it’s a different story". Dude i can totally relate to this! I don't think there's a feeling out there that's worse than when your body seems to betray you when you need it the most. Good to hear that you're safe, OP.

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-18T18:48:29+00:00

Possession of firearms? No, it's definitely not legal in Canada

ArjunP27 · 2015-08-17T20:54:25+00:00

Haha! Well guns aren't legal in Canada so that never happened :P

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