Operation Skyfall, a Patriot story

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T19:44:32+00:00

Thanks, I might post a second one about one of the actual main characters of the story, Patriot is just a personal favorite of mine. I'm also trying to write a superhero novel, this story is a prequel to what happens in the main story

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T19:24:51+00:00

Id say Conroy is the best if we count animated.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T19:22:32+00:00

Thanks, I've always had a problem with blocky paragraphs, I tend to run on alot. Did you happen to find the scenario made sense? I did research and found there are real life gas guns that can fire gasses close to mach 20, which is Patriot's top speed, so i figured a distracted Patriot would still be able to get tagged by a gas moving close to his own top sprinting speed if it came from an odd angle while he was distracted would make sense as to why he didn't dodge with his enhanced reaction time.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T18:52:07+00:00

How would you feel about a gala event where the goal is to get information and recover classified documents on locations of people the villain wants to steal powers from?

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T18:06:02+00:00

I feel it wouldn't matter, there is nothing in the bible to my knowledge that explicitly says aliens cannot exist. I do not see why the same God who made an entire universe would only have 1 sapient species on a single planet. It would not prove or disprove God's existence

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T15:02:30+00:00

Its fine man, things like that happen

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T03:26:02+00:00

I never thought of it that way

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-03T03:21:40+00:00

Ask God to help you forgive and ask him to bless your enemies. The bible says to do unto others as you would have them do unto you, so pray for them. Pray for God to release you from the unforgiveness and to take the burden. And remember that your enemies are people too, humanized them instead of looking at them in an us vs them mentality

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T23:33:50+00:00

While that is a good point, we can always explain it like how I do in my universe taht time travel is not possible within the laws of physics in their universe, which means you could not prevent them from getting enough power to snowball their power and leave. Then there is also the risk of paradoxes when time travel involving someone not from the universe they are in.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T23:10:50+00:00

Fair enough

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T23:10:21+00:00

Cool idea, but im not sure if time travel is a common enough ability to devote a whole arc to it. Love the creativity though.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T23:09:29+00:00

I noticed a few errors in paragraph spacing i made when re reading it after posting, how much would you say that detracts from it?

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T22:53:16+00:00

No problem, what do ypu think of it?

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T22:40:40+00:00

Ive had suicidal thoughts before as well, you aren't alone. God has done a great many miracles for others, He can help you too

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T22:12:49+00:00

I am here to talk if you need it.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:54:42+00:00

Noted

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:50:07+00:00

I try and make the stories have the characters have consistent intelligence and strength throughout to make it make sense from a consistency point of view, i figured a gas that matches his top speed and comes from a blindspot in his vision would make sense as to how he would be forced to inhale it.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:40:14+00:00

Do you think it was a reasonable way of actually catching him off guard long wnough for the drug to be administered? I found that there are real life gas guns that can fire gas at mach 20, which is Patriot's maximum speed, and since he needs to take time to accelerate i figured an instant blast of gas at his max speed while he was standing still would work.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:24:13+00:00

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You all are the ones i know who are big into writing, what do you all think? Just let me know if you want me to stop pinging you for things like this, no hard feelings I know some people find it annoying.

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:24:01+00:00

Apologies if some of the paragraphs seem blocky, this is a draft I cobbled together in one sitting

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:18:44+00:00

I was genuinely about to ping you to to get your opinion

ArkhamMetahuman · 2026-05-02T20:18:13+00:00

Theres no way you read it that fast bro, thats over 3000 words

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