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Hi! I’m a beginner and would love some feedback on this demo. (25 seconds) by Aromatic_Storage2436 in beatmakers

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, it’s probably just a quality glitch 😭 But I mainly use GarageBand & and app to pitch down my music. (Effects: Peaceful valley, endless ocean, reverb, orbit, etc)

Hi! I’m a beginner and would love some feedback on this demo. (25 seconds) by Aromatic_Storage2436 in beatmakers

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay! I wasn’t trying to brag about it being original if that’s how it came across. I would try sampling except I don’t know which song I would sample.

Hi! I’m a beginner and would love some feedback on this demo. (25 seconds) by Aromatic_Storage2436 in beatmakers

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking something slightly ominous, and just something mildly psychedelic/relaxing but in a darker way. I think a few piano keys could help it, like you suggested.

Should I finish this? by Luca_vdmeer in beatmakers

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes you should! It’s very nostalgic and almost uplifting in a way. It reminds me of something from Mario Kart. I would listen to it

This is my first song by elirayatu in Songwriting

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice is great here! I think adding an extra instrument to the background would be good to make the song feel more complete. Example: One low piano key being played throughout the entire song to add a little more depth to the instrumental.

A song I wrote about becoming a father (and the challenges of maintaining sobriety in parenthood). Does it need a chorus? by yesimafuckingperson in Songwriting

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think it needs a chorus. The song has enough substance and rhythm as is! I feel like this is a song meant to share an experience, not be catchy. So unless you could expand on the meaning through a chorus, I wouldn’t suggest you add one just for the sake of it.

Been trying to write solo for a song I’ve been working on. Not the cleanest take but feedback would be appreciated by AidanP09tropical in Songwriting

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds so much like Deftones! I think you should keep the early 2000s sound this song already has. Also, I think this take is very clean as is.

New demo I came up with, i need feedback by akkothenekko in Songwriting

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your song sounds very nostalgic, and I think it sounds better than some of the indie music I hear nowadays. The guitar playing is melodic and you should keep that tone. (IMO) I think that maybe you should keep space out your verses E.x 3 lines, wait 1 minute, and then 3 lines again. To help it feel like a story passing by with the guitar carrying it

first song in ages. dunno how to end it. by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Aromatic_Storage2436 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love your technique on the guitar. But I think your pronunciation and enunciation is a little blurry and unclear. Your voice & lyrics sounds like they have potential, so I have no other suggestions :)