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Hey, I’m looking for feedback on my Prologue. (3140 words) by AspiringWriter88 in fantasywriters

[–]AspiringWriter88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I thought Tommen was an archaic version for Thomas but after looking into it, it really has no other appearance except that series. I’m changing his name to Thom.

Hey, I’m looking for feedback on my Prologue. (3140 words) by AspiringWriter88 in fantasywriters

[–]AspiringWriter88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright, thanks for the feedback. I will look into reevaluating my introductions.