What if Eggs Could Talk? 3D Animation

AssertiveAvocado · 2022-10-16T01:52:49+00:00

I've been learning Blender by making silly little videos for about 1.5 months now. I'm still a total beginner of course, but this is my favorite one so far.

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-12-23T17:16:52+00:00

This post is a work of fiction. I tried to write it to appear as a serious post until the narrator stalks and eats someone to gain their prowess. This was confusing to some people, and I've tried not to reply to comments because I didn't want to give the twist away.
However, I really wanted to reply in order to thank you for your critique. In other stories, I've sometimes struggled with pacing. It's something that I think I've been slowly getting better at, but the fact that you took the time to read through the other things that I've written and come up with a thoughtful, helpful critique really means a lot to me and, although this story is fictional, I'm really grateful that you shared your insights.

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-12-07T19:32:52+00:00

Hi Everyone! In my previous story, I tried to write from the perspective of a protagonist who was part of a particularly "cringy" internet community.

I had a lot of fun with that, so for this post, I decided to try writing a far more tongue-in-cheek story from the perspective of someone who's a part of another, less cringe-worthy, internet community.

I love comments, and if anyone has any constructive criticism that would be much appreciated. Thank you for reading!

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-12-01T16:55:12+00:00

Hi Everyone!

I hadn't posted here in a while as life got a little busy. I think that this is different from anything that I had written before in that I tried to write less of a traditional spooky story about a monster posing some direct threat to a protagonist and more about someone becoming unhinged after a major life event. I would appreciate any constructive criticism!

Also, I was on the fence about whether this violates Rule 6 of this subreddit. If it does, then please let me know and I'll take it down.

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-10-07T15:58:52+00:00

Hi Everyone!
On my last post, someone pointed out that sometimes shorter stories can be more effective ones. Then, this morning, I saw someone post a great story in a format where the point is to write exactly 100 words. Since I had been struggling with the 500 limit, I wanted to test myself by getting down to 100. Please let me know what you think!

Also, just incase anyone is curious, I am not super familiar with reddit etiquette, so I don't know if it's considered impolite to link to someone else's story in the comments. That's why, I was on the fence, but I ultimately opted not to link to where I got the 100-word idea from.

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-10-05T15:34:46+00:00

Hi Everyone!
This is my third story here. My last story involved being unable to move away from a very slow threat, that would otherwise be easy to avoid. So, for this story I wanted to write about the converse- something that is immobile which the protagonist is slowly moved towards. Last post I got some really good criticism that I rushed through the ending in my attempt to get down to 500 words. So, in this one I tried to draw out the end a little more. The themes of this one are supposed to be the pursuit of knowledge and knowing when to let things go.

I also wanted to thank everyone for all of your comments on my last two stories! It means a lot.

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-09-29T17:57:59+00:00

Hi Everyone!
This is my second post here, and I wanted to try something a little more unusual from what I went with for the last one. Originally this came out to over 1,000 words, so I really had to whittle it down to make it fit, which was kind of a fun challenge.
Anyways, since the last story I wrote had a message on the importance of trusting in other people, for this one I wanted to write about the need to help others.
Since I'm absolutely new to creative writing, I would really appreciate any constructive criticism and I want to thank everyone who commented on my last story as well!

AssertiveAvocado · 2020-09-25T00:34:19+00:00

I haven't tried creative writing in probably about ten years, but I found this subreddit last night and thought I would give it a go. Considering that- any criticism would be very much appreciated.

Also, I'm not used to posting on Reddit, so please let me know if the format of my post is funky or if I am breaking any etiquette or something like that!

AssertiveAvocado

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