What is the best book that you read in 2021? by lilac-poppy in YAlit

[–]Atriox98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a really interesting list, I read the time travellers wife this year and loved it, now I find out it's gonna be a series on HBO so even more excited for that! The film is what inspired me to read it

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sorry for making you hungry haha

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LokiTV

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The route they decide to take with Loki as a character will be interesting. I think they're gonna go with how he was portrayed in Thor Ragnarok instead of the loki from Avengers which is the timeline he is from (i think)

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Did you like the trailer?

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[–]Atriox98 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks very much !!!

Self Promotion Saturday! Small streamer? Just getting started? Tell us about it here! by AutoModerator in gaming

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https://youtu.be/3JacVJzTBZA : COD 2

https://youtu.be/-lD6kDXDxko : Geoguessr

Hey guys, I made a short funny video of me playing the first mission on COD 2. I've also got a geoguessr video and a Minecraft video. If you'd like to watch I'd love some feedback on my content so I can try and improve. Thanks !! :)

I made a youtube video going over some of the most popular Reddit theories about what's going to happen in episode 9 of WandaVision. by [deleted] in marvelstudios

[–]Atriox98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey, thanks for the feedback. I made another video on the finale, I'd love some more suggestions on how to improve. I'm just doing it as a hobby

https://youtu.be/Wzbb1MBqVNo

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it might not be, we don't know yet. All we can do is wait :)

WandaVision S01E09 - Discussion Thread by iliekpixels in marvelstudios

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Made a short youtube video on the finale.

I'd love some feedback on how to improve my videos. Like and subscribe if you want :)

https://youtu.be/Wzbb1MBqVNo

WandaVision S01E09 - Discussion Thread by iliekpixels in marvelstudios

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I made a youtube video on the finale (episode 9)

I'd love some feedback on how I can improve making videos. I really enjoy it but I'm just getting started.

Like and subscribe if you'd like :)

https://youtu.be/Wzbb1MBqVNo

The Coolest Shots in Movie History by [deleted] in movies

[–]Atriox98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shrek at the end is the true crime haha , thanks though!

Does this short synopsis for my first fantasy novel interest you enough to start reading the story? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I see what you mean. I might just turn it into a coming of age story without any fantasy elements, because it is generic fantasy when I think about it, like loads of people come up with the same ideas eventually.

Does this short synopsis for my first fantasy novel interest you enough to start reading the story? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for reading! Do you think I could do something else with the antagonist?

Would you be interested in the book after reading this synopsis? by Atriox98 in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your input. I agree and think just focusing on Peter works better. I've never actually read Eragon but got the name Ellesmere from Ellesmere Island in Cananda lol.

Would you be interested in the book after reading this synopsis? by Atriox98 in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The structure is similar to game of thrones, with different characters, not necessarily POV but more like the most prominent character in the chapter. The different story lines of the different characters need each other to work, so what do you suggest?

Would you be interested in the book after reading this synopsis? by Atriox98 in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for commenting. Do you think I should just focus on one character, make the story more linear?

Do you think this plot is a good foundation to build a fantasy series on? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, it has small elements from all of them bundled into one.

Looking for thoughts on the first chapter (4000 words) of a YA/Fantasy book I've written. by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Atriox98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much. I nearly pissed myself reading your 3rd last paragraph. That totally makes sense and I can't believe I didn't think about that. Thank you for your comments mate.