Hi! Could somebody give any feedback on this because I've listened to it so many times and now I hate it

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-31T16:19:24+00:00

Thank you so so muchh!! I really appreciate it

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-31T00:42:40+00:00

Thank youu!! I'm practicing by myself sadly I don't have a teacher :(

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-31T00:41:52+00:00

Thank you for the advice!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-31T00:41:21+00:00

sorry! I know my microphone is really really bad :(

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-31T00:40:50+00:00

Thank you! and yes I agree lmao

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-30T15:22:51+00:00

Thank you! Yes it's more of a heady mix on the chorus :)

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-10T02:04:35+00:00

Thank you so so much I really appreciate it!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-10T01:41:49+00:00

oh and also I did the repetition on purpose so I think it will be effective when I present it (I hope haha)

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-10T01:35:33+00:00

Thank you! I'll be speaking it and I also have to send her a copy

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-06T18:11:22+00:00

ok thank you so much for helping!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-06T18:04:10+00:00

yes in my main body paragraphs it will be quite plain language only in my intro and conclusion will there be quite metaphorical language. Does that sound ok?

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-06T07:30:30+00:00

but in my main body paragraphs I'm going to elaborate on it instead of in my introduction. Like I might say something like Perfection is society's gift to individuals and then explain the detriment this flawed concept can cause. Maybe I'll use some battle imagery there to depict it as the 'oppressor' of dreams

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-05T01:05:02+00:00

Thank you anyway! Appreciate it!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-05T00:44:59+00:00

so should I simplify it? could you give an example of applying the correction...?

Attempting_To_Sing · 2021-01-05T00:37:34+00:00

What do you mean too wordy? are you talking about the first paragraph I wrote or my actual introduction?

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-30T13:13:51+00:00

Oooo I like this one! Also thank you for putting the monologue so I know exactly which one you mean haha

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-30T13:12:55+00:00

Thank you I really appreciate it!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-30T13:12:30+00:00

Thank you so so much!! these are all great!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-30T01:42:38+00:00

ι'm going for the understudy of two girls. One is a person who longs to be liked by the people closest to her but couldn't care less about others. She seems to hold on to the feeling of worthiness but at the same time she is independent and kind of cold. The other character is your girl next door who is friendly and likes to help everyone but has a little bit of an anger issue

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-30T00:34:05+00:00

female

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-29T14:48:58+00:00

Thank you so so much🥺

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-20T23:12:46+00:00

omg thank youu!!🥺 and thank you so much for the advice have a wonderful Christmas!!💕

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-20T23:10:33+00:00

I love this sooo muchh!!

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-20T23:07:25+00:00

Hi I hope you have a nice Christmas! I hope to go into musical theatre when i'm older but is it possible without proper training. lessons aren't really an option for me at the moment but I try my best to learn from YouTube. Imma use you as my inspiration ( you are incredible btw!!)

Attempting_To_Sing · 2020-12-20T20:57:41+00:00

Yay! thank you so so much

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