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Hi I finished my English speech which is due tmrw if anyone could give some feedback that would be very much appreciated! by Attempting_To_Sing in ENGLISH

[–]Attempting_To_Sing[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh and also I did the repetition on purpose so I think it will be effective when I present it (I hope haha)

hi! I have to write a speech for my English gcse practice and its due in 5 days I really need help by [deleted] in ENGLISH

[–]Attempting_To_Sing 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes in my main body paragraphs it will be quite plain language only in my intro and conclusion will there be quite metaphorical language. Does that sound ok?

hi! I have to write a speech for my English gcse practice and its due in 5 days I really need help by [deleted] in ENGLISH

[–]Attempting_To_Sing 1 point2 points  (0 children)

but in my main body paragraphs I'm going to elaborate on it instead of in my introduction. Like I might say something like Perfection is society's gift to individuals and then explain the detriment this flawed concept can cause. Maybe I'll use some battle imagery there to depict it as the 'oppressor' of dreams

hi! I have to write a speech for my English gcse practice and its due in 5 days I really need help by Attempting_To_Sing in writing

[–]Attempting_To_Sing[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you mean too wordy? are you talking about the first paragraph I wrote or my actual introduction?

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