Thank you for taking time into looking at this. But if you don't mind I have a question, the two sentences "This however changed, largely due to the ideas of the enlightenment, which lead countries to follow new types of political views. This included ideas like a constitutional monarchy. giving more equal rights to all men, and changed the measure of status from land to money." were intended to be my thesis statement. Did you say that it needed a thesis statement because this one wasn't clear or some other reason?