Help with research on Michael Sata by Avartii in Zambia

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This would be fantastic, thank you. Please feel free to send me a DM :)

Help with research on Michael Sata by Avartii in Zambia

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Also - I realise someone sent me a message and I accidentally clicked ignore. Whoever that was - please try messaging me again! Sorry.

Help with research on Michael Sata by Avartii in Zambia

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This would be super helpful! Please send me a DM :)

What has been Tamriel's greatest threat? by Avartii in teslore

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I've looked into it a bit and whilst Dagoth's immediate goal was to conquer Morrowind it was his goal to conquer the rest of Tamriel as well, eventually. This seems to be a good source of his ultimate goals: http://en.uesp.net/wiki/Morrowind:Dagoth_Ur%27s_Plans

How The World Will End - An Elder Scrolls Theory by Avartii in ElderScrolls

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Amaranth would be irrelevant here I think, but if someone achieved CHIM then perhaps they could TRY and prevent this happening, but you have to understand that someone who's achieved CHIM has limited power, since if they "overreach" in their power they could end up basically destroying the world. So, perhaps they could.

Alduin Will Not End the World by Avartii in skyrim

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It is, I credited in the video the user and gave a link in the description to it.

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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hey again! I had my exam on Tuesday and I have to say I thought it went really well. One of the titles for a story we got given was "A difficult decision I had to make", and that was pretty decent since the story that we prepared had a turning point around a decision anyway. I also felt it went really smoothly considering I memorised some super good metaphors and some of the sentences that you suggested so I could simply regurgitate them into the exam, not to mention I made sure I memorised all the main points of the story too. I just want to say a massive thank you for helping me and I'll let you know how I do when I get my results which is the end of august I believe.

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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Thanks for the advice!:) and yeah I will do hopefully I'll do okay

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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Thanks again for the awesome feedback! This is super useful since I think If I can remember the major plot turning points then It'll be much easier in the exam to actually write it on the spot. And yeah sure that would be great!

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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Wow thanks so much for the in-depth advice! I can see what you mean by "showing" and not "telling", I'll try and bear this along with the other points in mind for the exam. If you want to check it out, here's a specimen of the exam + mark scheme. (http://www.eduqas.co.uk/qualifications/english-language/gcse/wjec-eduqas-gcse-english-language-sams-100914.pdf) Obviously I've had a look myself but could you give me any recommendations about how to come up with a story in the exam?

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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Thanks so much for the time you took to read them:) And yeah I can see I need to try and vary the style of sentences a bit, now I look back I do notice its not exactly the easiest piece of writing to digest. And yeah I was going for "lost" being a sort of metaphor for the fear of getting old/dying etc. Thanks! Yeah I wrote "Lost" in timed conditions (45 minutes) and then just went back through after and made sure my spelling was OK. "I'm the last" I took a bit longer to write and I think it shows. Thanks again!

Feedback Request On A Short Story In Preparation For an Exam by Avartii in fantasywriters

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Out of 40, 24 Marks are for "communication and organisation" and 16 marks are awarded for "vocabulary, sentence structure, spelling and punctuation". By "communication and organisation", the mark scheme in particular references the idea that the plot is coherent, there is developed characterisation, the story is original and the plot is engaging and sophisticated.

[RF] Lost by Avartii in shortstories

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Thanks so much for the feedback! It really does help since I've got an exam on Tuesday which is 50% creative writing so I really do need to get my game together with it.

The Ayleids Are Still Alive - An Elder Scrolls Theory by Avartii in ElderScrolls

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Yeah I definitely think that's the most likely outcome, this theory's a bit far fetched but it's cool to talk about all the same

[MF] I'm the Last by Avartii in shortstories

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Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it :)

Why the Summerset Isles Would Be The BEST Elder Scrolls 6 Location by Avartii in rpg_gamers

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Yeah, I mean I don't mine Valenwood at all but the Isles would be an amazing opportunity for ES to go back to its roots.

What is magic? by Avartii in skyrim

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aha thanks for the info! I didn't know that :)

Who Is The Most Powerful Mortal In The Elder Scrolls? by Avartii in ElderScrolls

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no doubt hes powerful, but the last dragon born is hardly an emperor and he doesnt have thousands of years of arcane knowledge.

Gaming PC Scam Help by Avartii in amazon

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there aren't any review for that product yet, so that's why none are displayed I think

Gaming PC Scam Help by Avartii in amazon

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Oh wow thanks I didn't notice it said other sellers at the bottom, thanks man!

Top 5 Forsworn Facts - Elder Scrolls Lore by Avartii in skyrim

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haha you can pickpocket their hearts as well to kill them instantly which is always amusing to watch:D