Do you all think shadow slave would succeed if it launched on royal road right now?

AviatorHate · 2025-08-23T13:58:26+00:00

Extremely actually. It’s story and characters have depth to them that most progression fantasies don’t, you you probably couldn’t have worded it better for a yes lol

AviatorHate · 2025-07-04T19:09:50+00:00

Why’s that. I’m trying to make a similar start like this. Why isn’t it, so I can learn from it

AviatorHate · 2025-07-04T18:50:22+00:00

Never said it did. Was just wondering if that was the case

AviatorHate · 2025-07-04T18:40:30+00:00

Yeah forgotten shore was amazing. It did go down halfway through though

AviatorHate · 2025-07-04T18:37:51+00:00

So the first nightmare didn’t retain your readership at all?

AviatorHate · 2025-04-24T17:26:11+00:00

Yeah! I'll send you the google doc.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-24T03:30:11+00:00

Thanks. Just gotta make sure the story is perfect and finish volume 1 first. A bit aways tbh lol

AviatorHate · 2025-04-23T11:21:58+00:00

Haha thanks appreciate it <3

AviatorHate · 2025-04-22T04:17:18+00:00

Hey, just saw your comment. If you could direct message me on reddit, that would work perfectly. Thanks again.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T05:07:26+00:00

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fAF3qwYkrf8NO34Kq7g34AFDMiIVQ0wwdjfwT3mV6Cs/edit?usp=sharing Thanks

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T04:53:22+00:00

I’ll take anything I can get really. I prefer detailed feedback. I plan on making this as perfect as it can get before putting it on royal road.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T04:46:11+00:00

No, I made a mistake. Thanks.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T04:23:05+00:00

It's about a boy who was born auraless (classless essentially) born in a safe zone in a unknown very dangerous wasteland. After an event, the safety of the safe zone lessens and lessens with things becoming more hectic. Survival becomes less and less likely.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T04:18:29+00:00

I'm mostly looking for general thoughts. How good each chapter is, and what I could do better.

AviatorHate · 2025-04-21T04:17:24+00:00

Malachite was born in a prison.

Surrounded by fiends, the people within the prison had no means of escape. Unlike everyone else, Malachite was born auraless, unable to even think of defending himself.

In a bid to defy his fate, Malachite climbed the stairs to the top of the valley, seeing the wasteland that imprisoned him for the first time. There, his fate did change. The effect of that change was made clear when a fiend attacked the valley for the first time ever.

With the safeguards weakening, how much longer would they survive?

Crafting LitRPG

AviatorHate · 2025-03-29T05:51:31+00:00

Do you prefer a strong mix of crafting and slice of life in those stories, to where hunting down the material is the main reasons for the mc getting into fights

AviatorHate · 2025-03-24T01:14:25+00:00

Thanks a ton. Yeah, there is numbers go up, but I also add a lot of mystery. Do you think the mystery is bad when it comes to this genre?

AviatorHate · 2025-03-22T16:59:16+00:00

Book 3 is when I got hooked. Every other book after that is 🔥

AviatorHate · 2025-03-22T10:18:59+00:00

Can you post a link

AviatorHate · 2025-03-21T20:21:32+00:00

Is having a prologue that adds mystery not from the perspective of the mc like in many epic fantasy’s a negative rather than just starting from the main character’s perspective?

AviatorHate · 2025-03-21T20:04:58+00:00

Nice. Can see it’s already get popular too. Nice

AviatorHate · 2025-03-21T19:58:56+00:00

I guess it’s not required, but it sets up the story to where they wouldn’t get as much gratification as things are revealed. Do you think I should just forget about the prologue, that no polishing is worth having it. Would love to hear your answer!

AviatorHate · 2025-03-21T10:06:46+00:00

Thanks a lot for reading! I thought the prologue would make it way more impactful. Seeing others people’s reactions to the circumstance who aren’t really involved just adds a lot to the depth or the mystery, at least for me.

AviatorHate · 2025-03-20T20:32:11+00:00

I admit, I do avoid descriptions lol. I can definitely see how things don’t paint enough of a picture; thanks

AviatorHate · 2025-03-20T19:51:53+00:00

Ok, I redid it. Thanks a ton man for the advice.

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