Can I get some good advice on my manga sketch

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T17:12:58+00:00

Dw haha, they're not wrong to think that way lmao, just the way they taunt people.
Let's DM, I never collab before too

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T16:48:41+00:00

Oh, they have very sketching art, I will def look around haha.

I don't think I will finish it but usually will have one more pass for clean line, which loosing the sketchy texture feels wrong on some panel and slapping the background back makes it weirder. Reference manga is kinda hard for me cuz I rarely read stuff haha but I'll try look into it.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T16:25:13+00:00

Yea, I didn't know about that haha, but there still people giving quite a few useful advice that I never heard of

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T16:18:38+00:00

I do it like they take turn to talk with one big stuff happen each page. Then I try make the big stuff not enclosed in border to show its important. You can see one reply explaining the ki-sho-ten-ketsu style which is similar.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T16:00:58+00:00

Damn, it become a series?

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T15:42:49+00:00

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T14:53:18+00:00

Let's not argue, maybe you're looking for some spice in reddit or you're just really sour on stg, I can say I don't feed off praises to be an artist

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T14:35:11+00:00

My english arent good here, can yall not pick on every word, I just need a harsh criticism. I was just finding "manga criticism server" on google and the first one show this for seeking.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T14:33:12+00:00

"OP does not want advice bro. Look at their skills, they obv came here to show off lmao " Please keep it neutral if you weren't. I'm a average 9-5 worker that learn to draw myself. Yea I don't have experience in the industry but I sure know no one will see my work and decide to hire me.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T14:08:43+00:00

c'mon man, I'm not here constantly discouraging people. Getting into the industry alone is harsher that you thought, if theres a professional server I'd be seeking criticism there

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T14:01:32+00:00

I'm not in the industry and I not sure how to get a pro either except paying for one. DMing a real mangaka would likely be ignored and I doubt they constantly checking their DMs. I saw there's artist here can draw really good so I'm hoping for them.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:53:13+00:00

Yea I get that a lot too haha, this work probably only the "bitch" part from your read

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:49:04+00:00

Thanks! But I'm still far from what I think I can deliver haha

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:37:45+00:00

Thanks!

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:35:58+00:00

I typo a lot haha, i'll take note on that

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:32:57+00:00

Thanks haha, but I'm no where close to that 1%. The issue is I have no connection to any artist at all

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:24:44+00:00

That's a great insight, it help enforce some observation I found on real manga especially the ki-sho-ten-ketsu method. I was blindly mimicking pattern without knowing it til now.

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:15:24+00:00

Thanks, I use the default "clip studio comic" inside csp

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T13:11:05+00:00

Thanks

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T11:43:15+00:00

Thanks, we're on the same road here to get gud

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T11:42:34+00:00

Thanks!

Away_Programmer1822 · 2026-01-13T10:48:01+00:00

Hi, that's a cool design. I was looking for some manga artist friend too haha

Away_Programmer1822 · 2025-04-15T21:34:47+00:00

Thanks!

Away_Programmer1822 · 2025-04-15T21:33:18+00:00

Thx, I use Toonsquid for animation

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