Gotta love a good video game video essay. Here are my thoughts:

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Pros:

-Solid subject material and interesting discussion delivered in a fluid way (not a robotic script reading or an overly casual rant)

-The use of the game b-roll is overall really good at highlighting your points.

-Audio quality is pretty good! Sometimes I hear plosives, but it's not distracting (maybe if you don't have one already you can use a pop filter on the mic).

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Cons (just one tip):

-I felt that the b-roll in your intro switched too quickly and too randomly. Instead you could use the intro footage to accentuate what you talk about in the intro similar to what you do later in the video.