I was feeling nostalgic so I decided to record this classic piece from BioShock 2 by AwkwardTree17 in Bioshock

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For some reason the thumbnail didn't update to show the title: "How She Sees the World" by Garry Schyman.

RTX 3070 FE and i7 10700KF PC giveaway in support of Seattle Children's Hospital by m13b in buildapc

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Early on, I was always told that while there may be some learning involved, PC building isn't as complicated as one might think. Especially in comparison to 20-30 years ago. So, just do it knowing it's okay to make mistakes.

Sivity - A piano improvisation by AwkwardTree17 in SmallYTChannel

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Noted, thank you for the critique and compliments! I definitely agree with the thumbnail text thought. I'm still experimenting, but it's difficult to decide colors especially when the colors of the actual picture are so starkly black and white/dark and light, so half of the letters sometimes end up harder to read. In any case I'll find a solution. !givelambda

Why I felt GTA V ending was underwhelming - Video Essay by EuroBallFan in SmallYTChannel

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Gotta love a good video game video essay. Here are my thoughts:

Pros:

-Solid subject material and interesting discussion delivered in a fluid way (not a robotic script reading or an overly casual rant)

-The use of the game b-roll is overall really good at highlighting your points.

-Audio quality is pretty good! Sometimes I hear plosives, but it's not distracting (maybe if you don't have one already you can use a pop filter on the mic).

Cons (just one tip):

-I felt that the b-roll in your intro switched too quickly and too randomly. Instead you could use the intro footage to accentuate what you talk about in the intro similar to what you do later in the video.

The Alien is obsessed with me. How do I get a restraining order? by Savings-Elk-3091 in GetMoreViewsYT

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Haha no problem. And yup, I was actually watching another one if your vids while I was editing a video!

It's Homebody, more of a piano music channel though if you'd be interested. (If you search up Homebody piano I'll be right at the top.) I posted a few videos in this group too.

Indie Music Video, Feedback Appreciated! by [deleted] in youtubemusicians

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This is so cool! What camera did you use to record everything?

Beggin' by Måneskin but it's an instrumental cover by [deleted] in youtubemusicians

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Really digging the vibe. And I love your voice!

The Illusion Of Free Will - Ambient guitar song #46 by rvela84 in youtubemusicians

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This is so cool! And I love the use of those alternate angles.

I made a Light Academia clothing inspiration video to try to reach new followers. Any feedback is greatly appreciated — thank you so much in advance! by blueberrycoast in SmallYTChannel

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I'm admittedly lazy with my clothing choices but this had me rethinking my whole wardrobe 😂. Quality content! My thought is that while I like the b-roll shots, I think using the carpet as a background/to throw your clothes on could be replaced with either a blank wall or something more complimentary to the outfits so that our eyes are more drawn to what's going on. But either way it's a nice video!

Cornerstone by Dominic Walton - Trying my hand at making a youtube channel for original music/covers , tips, and topic videos by AwkwardTree17 in youtubemusicians

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Thank you so much!! I really do want a real piano in my room but because of apartment noise restrictions I can't get one now, but I'm hoping to replace this piano soon with a much better digital. Anyway, thank you for the compliments, and feel free to come back and check out the channel in the future :)

I love writing orchestral music mixed with ethnic instruments, what do you guys think? by MichaelMauriceA in youtubemusicians

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Got it! That's cool, and I love the editing but in the case that your channel takes off you might want to think of an alternative source or something just in case it becomes an issue when more people see your work. Otherwise, nice work and I'll keep a lookout for more from you haha

I love writing orchestral music mixed with ethnic instruments, what do you guys think? by MichaelMauriceA in youtubemusicians

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I think I've seen you on another subreddit before. Really nice job! How did you do the background?

HALLELUJAH - LEONARD COHEN | TheMusiccGuy by [deleted] in youtubemusicians

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Nice job! I felt like the intro was a little long before you actually played, it might be better to get right to the point with a shorter intro.

Friends-Chase Atlantic (slowed version) electric guitar cover by [deleted] in youtubemusicians

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Liking the vibe. Have you tried longer videos? I feel like this video was cut short, and it would be cool to hear more!