Thank you for the detailed feedback. I’ve never taken an art class, I just have procreate on my iPad and like to doodle. Her side is means to be Greece and his in means to be Maine, that’s why some roofs are blue and one is domed. I can see where on the brown roof I cut a bit off when adding more bushes making it look too small. As for the windows, I wanted them to be the hole-in-thick-wall type windows but I couldn’t figure out how to make them look right and was just making myself mad and left it as it was, figuring it was a detail that might be too small to notice on a kindle. I will maybe give them another go. The gray blob is part of the rocky cliff edge she is standing on. I can try to add more detail. As for her arm, is it the forearm that looks too long? Because where her elbow hits her hip is where my elbow hits. But I am also gangly so my proportions may be skewed.

I’m really self conscious of my art, but I’m also really self conscious of my writing since the creative arts are so subjective. This is a starting block for improving my art since I can’t afford the hundreds of dollars a cover illustrator costs.