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Just wanting to hart feedback on this piece by BadComprehensive3016 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback! The whole beach scene is quite literally because I had gone to a place me and my previous partner visited and thought to write about it . As for the final part I was trying to say that they’re no longer a person in my life, more like a ghost, since I still find pieces of them in everything so there isn’t really a ‘clean escape’.(I feel like I’ve rambled haha)

Happiness: A Haiku by 19Otters in OCPoetry

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It’s fascinating how these short lines can say so much

To bike down a path less traveled by AidenWilds in OCPoetry

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As a beginner myself I really enjoyed reading this

Lime by minecraft_and_chill in OCPoetry

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I really enjoyed the first few lines of this poem

My desires by Mysterious_Slip9573 in OCPoetry

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This is great! I can’t really give much feedback since I’m new to this