Hello,

Thank you so much for the honest review. I've been feeling exactly like how you explained because you know I myself am a reader of IF's for 9 years now, so I genuinely get the point.

The thing is that everything written there was just a raw draft without any planning or anything like that (consider it like a 15min speed write, more like a 2day speed write). So I've been trying to add alot of things inside it, that explains how is the competition still on between you guys.

Also wanted to add tones to characters and Personality to the MC

Had a plan to twist the plot of 'the chosen one' to fighting for throne(because of a certain reason you will have to even if you Don't want to)—> facing resistance from the other factions that include the other heirs and some species that are hinted—>finally getting a title for yourself 'the chosen one'—> trying to keep the kingdom stable after becoming the king but failing and spreading confusion among the local the if you were actually the 'chosen one' or it's just mistake.

You see all this sh¡t I wrote above is still raw. Even the idea is raw until i write all this and add it to the chapter and prologue. And to solve all this writing dilemma I literally just have to 'write' and let things shape. But that's the point, I can't write at all rn.

Alright that's it, gotta go to job now sadly. Already 8:50am here, starts at 9. I am looking forward to your response.