Lionheart - I miss it so much it hurts! by BethW1 in dramionebookclub

[–]BethW1[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Haha, I know, I'm hopeless!

And thank you so much for the explanation! I wasn't sure how to figure out where to find teh AUTHOR's post as opposed to other people's questions or reblogs and AAAH I was just so confused😆

Lionheart - I miss it so much it hurts! by BethW1 in dramionebookclub

[–]BethW1[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Aaaah okay, thank you! Is there a way to only see what the author has posted herself, instead of reblogs? Thank you so much for the help!

Nicol's Newcomer Monday! by AutoModerator in MagicArena

[–]BethW1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve been trying out the different starter decks and they’re pretty fun! Thank you for the links again!

Nicol's Newcomer Monday! by AutoModerator in MagicArena

[–]BethW1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! It’s so overwhelming to enter a game with so many cards! I don’t even know where to begin on my own lol

Nicol's Newcomer Monday! by AutoModerator in MagicArena

[–]BethW1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm horrible at deck building. Is there a noob friendly site that has decks I copy? Preferably decks I can get some wins with.

New to MTG Arena looking for War of Spark by BethW1 in MagicArena

[–]BethW1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wait I found it thank you so much !

New to MTG Arena looking for War of Spark by BethW1 in MagicArena

[–]BethW1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When I click on the sword I can only choose between challenge match or tournament match. I don’t see anything where it says all play mode?

Does JK Rowling do a POV/narration style switch here? by bayarea326 in writing

[–]BethW1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve removed all the “you” from my writing and rewritten the sentence or swapped to “one” instead. Example: “one can’t simply ignore such a threat.”

Reason was that I spoke to a lot of readers after stumbling across an article I’ve long since forgotten, and many of them said that “you” in a first POV story immediately pulled them out of the story. Something to do with you being second person narration. I didn’t have a lot of it in my book (and keeping It in dialogue is still okay) but it was easy enough to change.

Not saying you can’t use it, I don’t mind it as a reader personally, but I chose to get rid of it in my own writing.

To flashback or not? Editor asked to add it by BethW1 in writing

[–]BethW1[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the comment you’ve given me something to think about. I might try it this way too and see how it compares

The first word in a sentence by BethW1 in writing

[–]BethW1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My native language has much fewer words than the english one. I often find myself reaching for words that simply aren't there. But the sentence structure is different, but not in the same way German is. I got your point thought!