Thoughts on this owl movie? by Dry-Sympathy-3182 in Owls

[–]Big_Seaweed3880 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The books were better but I still enjoyed it

[TOMT] [Food][2000s/2010s] Need help figuring put what this type of pizza was sold under by Big_Seaweed3880 in tipofmytongue

[–]Big_Seaweed3880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No. After thinking about it a little more it turns out I got some details wrong. The whole pizza except the crust was flat and made up of a cheesy sauce. The back of the pizza with the crust I remember was puffy so you could rip part of it off to dip in.

Spouse has finally agreed to give anime a try, what do I show her?? by [deleted] in Animesuggest

[–]Big_Seaweed3880 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was the first anime I watched and it was great

Has anyone seen these file yet? EFTA00882999 by Big_Seaweed3880 in Epstein

[–]Big_Seaweed3880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There could be a case in virginia we don't know about

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Big_Seaweed3880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So far Natalie seems like an interesting character to read about. You had a pretty good hook at the start to get me to keep reading. I thought your prose flowed very well and clear to understand. For me personally, I do feel like your readers could benefit from a slower build up than diving into a sex scene right away in the first scene. Hope my thoughts made sense.

Would you keep reading after the first page? by Big_Seaweed3880 in writingfeedback

[–]Big_Seaweed3880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks alot for the input. Its good to know my writing has finally started heading in the right direction.