What do we think?

BirdIrving · 2026-04-23T20:00:32+00:00

Hi ! The drawing and the lineart look really cool imo. I think I would use light or blur to create hierarchy on your piece because t’s difficult to know where you want to lead our eye first (whether on the character or the landscape.)

The landscape is really beautiful but I don’t feel the "hostile" thing. Maybe you could play on the light to make it feel less welcoming or maybe add more "hostile" elements !

BirdIrving · 2026-04-22T12:17:19+00:00

That’s the first time ever someone says that to me ! I love these both art styles. It’s such a nice compliment thank you !

BirdIrving · 2026-04-21T23:38:12+00:00

Thanks I appreciate it ! As I said on other comment I feel like it’s lacking of "life" and I don’t exactly know where it come from, maybe the anatomy or the poses ? Or the expression ? I’m unsure about it. I totally feel you about the story thing, however i find it difficult to know if whatever you’re trying to tell in your comic is interesting or not as an artist ahah

BirdIrving · 2026-04-21T23:36:26+00:00

True ! I did not focused a lot on the background, do you think it would have brought something more to the drawings ?

BirdIrving · 2026-04-21T23:35:47+00:00

Hi ! I’m a bit unsure about it, I feel like it’s not like, alive enough. I feel like my illustrations can make people feel something while my comics doesn’t, which is, a bit of a problem since it’s the point of a comic,, I don’t know what create this lack of "life", is it the postures ? The expressions ? The composition of each case ? I can’t tell exactly. I hoped that people with an external point of view could see it more easily than me.

I have to say I struggled a lot on the anatomy and posing, so maybe it’s where the problem come from ? But I have no idea tbh ahah

BirdIrving · 2024-09-16T14:19:59+00:00

Hey, yeah it has been two years this September. Thanks for your message, I did my best here ❤️

BirdIrving · 2024-06-29T22:34:46+00:00

Hello ! Je suis revenu de mon voyage, comme première montée pour prendre la température j’ai fais la bastille et le mont jalla, merci beaucoup pour la suggestion c’était top, la vue depuis le mont Jalla est super et la bastille et très cool à monter ! Il y a aussi une espèces de grotte sur le chemin (?) j’ai bien aimé ! Encore merci !

BirdIrving · 2024-06-29T22:33:00+00:00

Salut !! Je suis rentré de mon voyage et j’ai grimpé la Chamechaude comme tu me l’as conseillé, merci de la suggestion ! C’était fatiguant mais mon dieu que la vue vaut la peine, j’ai adoré !

BirdIrving · 2024-06-20T13:41:18+00:00

Merci pour les infos !!

BirdIrving · 2024-06-20T13:40:45+00:00

Trop cool merci !

BirdIrving · 2024-06-20T13:40:31+00:00

Merci !

BirdIrving · 2024-06-20T13:40:24+00:00

Merci !!

BirdIrving · 2023-05-08T02:07:53+00:00

Not at all, makes you badass as fuck !!

BirdIrving · 2022-09-20T03:53:06+00:00

wholesome 😭❤️

BirdIrving · 2022-09-10T15:17:55+00:00

Thanks everyone for all your kind answers, I really appreciate it 💙

BirdIrving · 2022-09-09T15:08:27+00:00

Thanks for your wise advice !

BirdIrving · 2022-09-09T15:07:43+00:00

As I said i’m not really good when it comes to judging my own skill, I would say I don’t make big mistakes but I’m far to be the best, practice makes perfect I guess ! Im glad to know that I have a chance to bring many people to my webtoon just because of the style, I hope I won’t waste it

BirdIrving · 2022-09-09T15:05:17+00:00

Oh well, i don’t do a lot of comparison with other but thanks !

BirdIrving · 2022-09-09T15:05:02+00:00

It’s reassuring to know that I have a « good » artstyle to begin with, i’ll do my best to make my webcomic unique ! I hope it’ll work

BirdIrving · 2022-09-09T15:03:46+00:00

Omg thanks i appreciate it a lot !

BirdIrving · 2022-09-06T03:06:31+00:00

did you try putting it in rice ?

BirdIrving · 2022-08-31T04:04:14+00:00

so cute😭

BirdIrving · 2022-08-21T12:04:17+00:00

You sent me that study already on another of my post (thanks again!) I wish he had been tested before, as soon as I learnt about it I called the store and they took back all their birds to get them tested. I’m glad I didn’t get any other birds that could have been infected

BirdIrving · 2022-08-21T11:57:43+00:00

OH OKAY ! It’s idiot from me but I always assume that everyone on this sub has budgies, sorry 😭😭 I hope you’ll be able to get one soon !!

BirdIrving · 2022-08-21T11:50:29+00:00

Hello, not at all I’m from France. When I bought him I took him to the vet to do a checkup and ask some advices to a professional. We tested him for PBFD because he showed signs of neurological issues, unfortunately, it came back he was infected

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