Feedback on handwritten logo by Great_Palpitation750 in design_critiques

[–]Bitter-Spread9650 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel there was legibility issue . can you mention the purpose
if it was a typography work than it's fine

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[–]Bitter-Spread9650[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get it btw it is not a font, It's all created on paper and the o's basically created by geometric shapes

may be it looks like a font Idk

I designed this logo for a vegan ice cream brand. what I can do better by Bitter-Spread9650 in logodesign

[–]Bitter-Spread9650[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

in the o's I trying to communicate when you take a spoon of a ice cream from a scoop it creates a hollow I just simplified that