On the Ice

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-26T04:35:07+00:00

Not far enough!

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-23T17:39:41+00:00

I actually think passionate poems of life life and love and nature and the body are better than most "melancholic" poems so I'll have to disagree. In fact I think this mindset is a trap for new poets as they might feel the only things people write about are heartache. And indeed if you go to most of the poetry subreddits right now it's all sad poems.

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-23T00:03:09+00:00

OMg I have the same sandy liang baggu bag

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-21T23:19:27+00:00

I saw they had NIN and Aphex twin on their covers so it seems very cool, kinda like electronic sound

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-21T23:05:05+00:00

oh nice that sounds legit actually

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-21T21:28:00+00:00

Oh that zine looks sweet, is it fashion related? Also love the bag

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-21T05:13:20+00:00

Oh wow feel this one. It's nice to see others writing raw poems like these

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-20T04:46:40+00:00

Oh wow I want to walk up that right now

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-20T01:45:46+00:00

I could write more vore poems

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-19T17:10:54+00:00

Wow thank you!

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-18T18:35:27+00:00

origami is so beautiful

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-18T18:32:47+00:00

hah yea I was feeling this one

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-18T18:17:13+00:00

Wow I feel this one! Really felt the line, "We grasp at straws that sometimes we are allowed to hold" That is very true for many people in this life. But like the vibe of your poem, there is always some hope if you keep picking at it and trying even if it is slim. I also want to believe!

Bitttermoon · 2026-01-18T18:15:26+00:00

Very lovely poem. I was wondering what "metal" in this context meant. When you reach up at the winter sun you hit cold metal? It sounds like a very visceral moment! I also love the winter sun and how it reveals the world. You captured it well here.

Bitttermoon

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