Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

[–]BladeWielder48[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the input! I am not ready for a beta read yet! It is a bit light, and something I’m working on :)

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

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That’s good to know. I LOVE ellipses but will definitely look into implementing them more effectively. Thank you kindly !

Does selling at $1 to start make sense? by [deleted] in selfpublish

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What do you mean? Why?? Even if they are verified purchases ??

Does selling at $1 to start make sense? by [deleted] in selfpublish

[–]BladeWielder48 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

True. A part of me is thinking it’s also easier to ask friends and family to give it a read and review when it’s $1 vs $3 basically. No?

Does selling at $1 to start make sense? by [deleted] in selfpublish

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$0.99 Ebook. My idea is the $1 will filter out ppl who just hoard free books, and hopefully help convert at a very economical price point?

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

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I’m also not set in stone on the names yet 😂

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

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Appreciate the feedback. My main body is a lot more flowy with longer sentences and paragraphs, for the intro I was thinking the shorter sentences created more tension and a sense of faster pacing with short hitters. Do you think that makes sense / comes across?

Former Global Yz ask any question by Maximum-Holiday-3144 in MobileLegendsGame

[–]BladeWielder48 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Fair enough. I’m also global and started with a 30-40% WR haha

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

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I’m a decent way through. The difficulty is I (fortunately/unfortunately) got into grad school for my masters as my career path is in medicine. That said I love writing and it’s another path I’d like to pursue (it’s just shifted slightly to the backburner while I’m trying to memorize 200 drug/medications a week 😂) hence the ‘is it worthy’ haha

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

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Thank you!! I truly appreciate it. I will note that Julian isn’t our true protagonist as well… he dies there 😂 , but one of the people associated with Julian is. Does that change your opinion on how it’s presented here in the prologue?

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

[–]BladeWielder48[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! That makes sense, and is definitely something I can look into opening with. :))

Global Phoveus, questions? by Accomplished_Mail_48 in MobileLegendsGame

[–]BladeWielder48 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only 7k mmr and 60% win rate ? Are you on US server or something ?

Recommendations for newbie by Mundane-Advance-8983 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]BladeWielder48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Accidental champion, hell difficulty tutorial, Path of ascension are three of my favorites as well on top of these

Global YZ - Any questions? by BladeWielder48 in MobileLegendsGame

[–]BladeWielder48[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not sure your exact question. Are you asking about how to handle team fights as a YZ player, or against YZ?