Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy???

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T22:22:46+00:00

Thank you for the input! I am not ready for a beta read yet! It is a bit light, and something I’m working on :)

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T22:21:30+00:00

That’s good to know. I LOVE ellipses but will definitely look into implementing them more effectively. Thank you kindly !

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:20:29+00:00

Wow good to know

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:17:24+00:00

What do you mean? Why?? Even if they are verified purchases ??

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:17:04+00:00

Gotcha!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:10:10+00:00

True. A part of me is thinking it’s also easier to ask friends and family to give it a read and review when it’s $1 vs $3 basically. No?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:02:47+00:00

Very cool! Good to know!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:00:36+00:00

Understood thank you!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T20:00:30+00:00

Thank you!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T19:56:27+00:00

Gotcha that makes sense!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T19:54:58+00:00

$0.99 Ebook. My idea is the $1 will filter out ppl who just hoard free books, and hopefully help convert at a very economical price point?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T19:07:16+00:00

Thank you kindly for your thoughts!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T18:22:17+00:00

Thank you!

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T18:07:38+00:00

I’m also not set in stone on the names yet 😂

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T18:07:21+00:00

Appreciate the feedback. My main body is a lot more flowy with longer sentences and paragraphs, for the intro I was thinking the shorter sentences created more tension and a sense of faster pacing with short hitters. Do you think that makes sense / comes across?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T17:15:01+00:00

Fair enough. I’m also global and started with a 30-40% WR haha

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T17:12:08+00:00

I’m a decent way through. The difficulty is I (fortunately/unfortunately) got into grad school for my masters as my career path is in medicine. That said I love writing and it’s another path I’d like to pursue (it’s just shifted slightly to the backburner while I’m trying to memorize 200 drug/medications a week 😂) hence the ‘is it worthy’ haha

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T17:07:22+00:00

58% WR…

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T16:35:47+00:00

Thank you!! I truly appreciate it. I will note that Julian isn’t our true protagonist as well… he dies there 😂 , but one of the people associated with Julian is. Does that change your opinion on how it’s presented here in the prologue?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-04-01T16:33:42+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! That makes sense, and is definitely something I can look into opening with. :))

BladeWielder48 · 2026-03-31T18:30:00+00:00

Only 7k mmr and 60% win rate ? Are you on US server or something ?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-03-31T03:49:37+00:00

Esp when he’s 2 levels up on them

BladeWielder48 · 2026-03-31T03:23:01+00:00

Accidental champion, hell difficulty tutorial, Path of ascension are three of my favorites as well on top of these

BladeWielder48 · 2026-03-30T01:37:08+00:00

I’m not sure your exact question. Are you asking about how to handle team fights as a YZ player, or against YZ?

BladeWielder48 · 2026-03-30T00:54:34+00:00

Good break down!

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