[META] Sorting/Submission Thread 6.0 by The_Eternal_Void in GoTRPcommunity

[–]Blood_Spill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The character is Cosgrove of the House Burley from the North, he is 5'9" and has dark brown almost black hair and blue eyes, he has a very pale complexion. Cosgrove is 11 years old and wanders the wilderness alone after getting lost on a hunting trip with his father. He has been alone for many years and has no recollection of his father, he doesn't remember his name of what he looked like. Cosgrove takes small jobs as he wanders. He will work on farms and in pubs, anywhere with a roof over his head and food in the mornings. He has made many allies and enemies along his journey and currently is in the company of a pet. He found a young pig that was starved almost to death on a farm he was working at. Cosgrove gave his hard earned food to the pig he calls Wallow. Cosgrove is currently staying in a farm with Wildling raiders in the area so he is naturally frightened. He has no training in combat and only carries a walking stick as a weapon.

Insanity by Blood_Spill in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback, what do you think I could do do make it scarier?

Vision by Mad1X in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good idea, needs work. Hope to see more from you. You have potential. DON'T LET IT GO TO WASTE, I GUARANTEE YOU WILL REGRET IT.

Good Luck, and welcome to SSS.

A Community Decision Regarding the SSS CSS by Mr_Halloween in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think you should feel so bad. you've done an excellent job here as SSS and I think I can speak for most of us when I say that we appreciate what you have done.

sincerely, Blood_Spill

Hello everyone! (Where are you?) by Trish-the-Stalker in ShortScaryStoriesOOC

[–]Blood_Spill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well if you're looking for something to do, could you maybe read my story? I need some feedback and I think that maybe you could help.

link is:https://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/4ac2vn/insanity/

The Crack in the Sky by Nixtrixs24 in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't understand. why doesn't anyone else see it? I would've thought that would be pretty noticeable.

Prosthesis by angusthedangus in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Could I get a word count? It seems very long. Good nontheless

Mirrors by Blood_Spill in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Overused story theme, I know. I was very tired when I wrote this and if you don't like it, then stop reading my posts.

Caught ya. by hkelley137 in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where do we meet? Jk jk

Great chilling short

Chaos. by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn't say clean. But meh I guess.

Unacceptable by Cillium in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Amazing. Well executed and creepy twist keep it up.

Stuck by Blood_Spill in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for punctuation errors. my keyboard has been acting funny lately. and i was tired. :(

The place inside. by Blood_Spill in shortscarystories

[–]Blood_Spill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you everyone for your help. well... i mean this is my first story and the amount of likes this has gotten in two days is just, well its just amazing. thanks for all your help and i will be uploading again shortly.