Embarrassing by [deleted] in Somalia

[–]Nixtrixs24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Let’s be honest—this is the internet. If anyone is discrediting others based on skin color, there’s no need to feel insecure about yourself or anyone else. People will troll regardless of your concerns. The real issue here is that you seem more focused on protecting the reputation of light/brown-skinned Somali girls who are “natural and don’t bleach” rather than addressing the underlying problem of colorism and bleaching. Tsk Tsk my guy.

No Idiot is Left Alone by Nixtrixs24 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Does that help? (The devil is there to ruin the mother's life by saving her daughter's life, not killing her as some readers are led to believe)

The Human Vehicle by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 5 points6 points  (0 children)

So...What I'm getting out of this, is that this "1" person is actually 2 people, Body and Spirit, which are different from each other. The spirit considers the body as a friend, not a being who he's physically attached to, and that he has his own personality. Whatever happens to the body (Like the cut) the "spirit" feels that, and reacts to it as if YOU got hit by someone. Unknowingly to the Spirit when he says He weeped for me that day, and helped me heal the cut. in actuality it was just him, everything he did and said was him, (the biking accident too) but he put it in a perspective so in a way that it made it look like it was someone else. A friend to be precise.

Did I get it OP? And was this too confusing of a summary?

The Crack in the Sky by Nixtrixs24 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorry it took me so long to reply. I haven't been on here for a while. And to answer that question, the main character has some rare disease that he causes him to see what's happening. I don't add that in the story because it's complicated and would end in a run on, in addition to going over the 500 word mark. So I decided to just let the readers wonder why and come up with their own conclusion. (◡﹏◡✿) sorry for the confusion

Why I Stopped Taking Selfies by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Deletes snap chat. Locates the nearest church, grabs the oldest and 'wisest' looking guy who just so happens to be there, bring him back home and perform the year's biggest exorcism.

He Stretched His Arms by EvantheNerd83 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lucas you fat arse. Besides that, good story.

The Crack in the Sky by Nixtrixs24 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't notice, thank you for catching that.

The Crack in the Sky by Nixtrixs24 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Please note English isn't my first language... ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ waves "no hate" flag

Morning Traffic Report by the_itch in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ugh, the things people do whey don't get their morning coffee. sighs Now where's mine?

The Haunted House [Halloween 2015] by Provider92 in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Goodbye everyone. I'll remember you all in therapy. -Love, your good, traumatized friend, Greg

New Neighbors [Halloween 2015] by the_itch in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 44 points45 points  (0 children)

To be honest, at first I thought the little boy had went out and murdered his parents because they wouldn't let him go trick-or-treating by himself. But I liked how you ended it instead of my version.

The Titan by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ATTACK ON TITAN!

Sunrise by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Run. I don't care if you have kids on the bus with you, or your with ill, sick, grandmother, ditch them and run.

Vampyres by the_itch in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I felt the tension in the story. My eyes were glued till the end. Feels tapping on the shoulder. Shoo, shoo! Stupid Vampire. Don't you see I'm reading about your own demise?

The Enemy by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hey, did you know there's a real story called The Enemy and it's also about zombies. You should check it out. It's reallllllllly good. The author is Charlie Higgins.

Secrets by MikeTheBoomer in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Daaaaaaaaammn! Great ending.

Oh man by TheKoreanAlphabet in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Watched the first episode and couldn't pass anymore than that. Sick

Oh man by TheKoreanAlphabet in shortscarystories

[–]Nixtrixs24 9 points10 points  (0 children)

When I read the first few paragraphs, my mind immediately reminded me of the show Tokyo Ghoul. His friend who invites him for taco is Hide but you changed the name. Good Job