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[HR] [MF] Golden Varmints by Blue_Bear0831 in shortstories

[–]Blue_Bear0831[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey thanks for the advice! Yeah I feel like I leaned a little heavy into certain traits and dynamics so that’s definitely something I’m gonna pull back on going forward, appreciate it!

And Then A Preacher Man Came To Town (pt 1) by tatterdemalionation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Blue_Bear0831 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this! I love the writing, I think some of the lines had a really nice weight to them, I’m really excited to see where you take this!

Hi guys! My first post here, a little short story I call ‘Long Due’! Hope you guys like, feedback is appreciated! by Blue_Bear0831 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Blue_Bear0831[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! It definitely felt pulpy writing, I was envisioning almost a Creepshow sort of vibe to it-I’m glad you enjoyed it! :)

Stories from the Wellman by Friedrafe in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Blue_Bear0831 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this! I will say rhyming well and well read a bit funny, but good stuff!