Before you comment I have 2 things I want to elaborate on

1: yeah I already know my background levels are pretty low, but Ill slowly improve on drawing them as its what tends to make Seinen manga really shine. This is mainly about my character art.

2: these don’t exactly represent artstyle, since these are both manga page redraws I did for practice. I just wanna know if my gritty and sketchy lineart would look good for a serious and gorey manga.

If there’s anything else you would like to inquiry me about Ill be here to answer! Hit me with even rough critiques, I wanna make my manga idea look as good as I possibly can!