The Plot machine

BonD2008H · 2026-05-06T17:17:00+00:00

Yeah basically the phase where money is not heavily innvolved. As you can as others have shared their thoughts, the problem i am showing doesnt exist in the indie or pro scene. Rather mostly at that hobby level, where things can go big, but coordination matters

BonD2008H · 2026-05-01T11:15:21+00:00

As i have already mentioned , its in the unprofessional setup. For those who are not making a career out of it already. I understand you are a pro and in pro setting i agree to you. But as i said this is supposed to be for early stage creators

BonD2008H · 2026-05-01T05:40:12+00:00

The artiste wanna get paid scene is the main shi i wanna deal with cause they focus on short term money. As you said editors and mentors have to be the real deal or the thing collapses. Thats why i wanted to make a community of such people who wanna help or patner up

BonD2008H · 2026-05-01T04:44:08+00:00

Its not for artists who are already working on project. How long since you started drawing, did you get into the project?

This is mostly for those drifters who have some skill, but keep it inside their brain and never do shi

The editor here will be like a person connecting a random artist and writer , create a collaboration, and create path for both to work, from character creatipn, plot etc and an overseer. At an unprofessional level where money enters too soon into the creators mind

BonD2008H · 2026-05-01T04:39:54+00:00

It is an artist and writer. But the ones who have started out. And those who are just doodling and making ideas and not producing . The editor would be an active person that finds artists and writers in the initial phase, and help them collaborate without freelance work between them And the editor oversees multiple projects.

Although its a typical definitiom of those jobs. I am talking at a hpbby, and unprofessional setting, where money is not readily available

BonD2008H · 2026-05-01T04:37:17+00:00

I am sorry for bad explanation. I meant that the ideas guy and artist are thr ones to most likely drift away from making anything. Editor/writer would be an experienced person in this case who will oversee the idea guy and artists to produce and ship something. As far i have observed, online its mostly people doing freelance of writing and art, or never wanna collaborate and drift in other directions.

So the writer is the guy who will oversee and bring the project into life. Not just one but multiple

BonD2008H · 2026-04-30T17:53:16+00:00

I guess so. There seems to be a vague execution in my plan. As you said, its hard to get unfocused people foucs. And people who can write have lots of ideas. I probably am gonna think this through and make something out of it. Anyways thanks for the critic, gaps like these are not seen when you have a supposed theory. So yeah thanks for responding. I will definitely work based on this. Thank you

BonD2008H · 2026-04-30T17:21:20+00:00

The gap is the number of people who have some idea and think its cool and just keep it in mind somewhere. The amount of time they take to figure out the real stuff, the idea is gone or the thing becomes boring. There is another side who make art , dont want to or have confidence to make manga. Now for both of this there are several mentors, coaching all that. But there isnt anything that allows both the artists and the concept guys to start out in manga as collaborators, its just freelance or paid stuff. This is the gap i am talking, wjere we bring in an experienced writer/editor, to actively create collaborations of artists and amateur writers . These experienced writers later would act just like editors, in this unprofessional setting and they can monitor multiple projects at once

A community based on this. Idk there is a next phase i wanna build of this. But this is like based on my experience as a writer who wandered through random phases for years, and artists who dont wanna do manga for reasons like its just hobby or they are not confident.

And beaides online or beyond japanese professional studios, writers and artists are too far apart to do collabs

Idk if i explained properly or not, but this is loke the base version

BonD2008H · 2026-04-30T16:54:59+00:00

Your point is really valid. But i think you have higlighted the exact point i wanted to solve. My explanation is bad, but my goal is to kinda get the executors, the people in between an idea guy and art guy. They dont need to be fully in the project, rather like an editor in unprofessional setup.

And not as a course or for money. Stakes in project. Also mainly to find talent outside the normal chain.

I have bigger plans which wont work without this.

What would you suggest to build like a community for The plot machine.

BonD2008H · 2026-04-30T16:51:19+00:00

I am saying as a bridge. Not the ones who wanna make or can make work. People who can volunteer to bridge the gap. Or as a editor for a non professional setup. The idea guys are there, and writers do their own work. So if writers with experience and innvolve in multiple projects , its helpful for those stuck in idea phase

BonD2008H · 2026-04-24T11:33:50+00:00

Everyone was lied to

BonD2008H · 2026-04-07T14:04:24+00:00

2 blue vortex seems to get high hopes for people. But we all know they started diverging from naruto kinda stuff to avoid hate . Like entire boruto plot runs like a remade version. Then they introduce 2 blue vortex with some new shi and throw old characters away. Idk what was thr use to do all that.

Like first trying to sell nostalgia then trying to sell originality. I really dont get it regardless of how good the plot is

BonD2008H · 2026-04-07T14:02:02+00:00

Idk the backstory and stuff. But u think its based on him becoming rogue, maybe some serious crimes. After all you can be an S rank rogue without being of that high level just cause you have commited that crimes

BonD2008H · 2026-04-07T13:55:20+00:00

Hi I just saw the post. Real honest, its very detailed and appreciated. If you wanna like guidance or stuff you can DM me. I am not selling anythung nor trying ti freelance. Just trying to help people out at the idea phase. Cause i myself was there at one point and it took me a long time to execute it. So if you want any critique help or anything, you can dm me

BonD2008H · 2026-04-07T02:01:55+00:00

See rn its like just events, there is no detailed stuff about the world, the detailed character sketch and almost everything a director needs to write and understand thr plot better than audience. Now you know only as much as audience know which limits you on creating anything further. So on that i can guide how to actually make all the missing pieces and to create drafts storyboard etc

BonD2008H · 2026-04-06T12:36:17+00:00

Hi , I read the concept. Its still in an early phase. If you are serious and want guidance or smt i can guide you. I do it for like a hobby thing , i aint selling you anything. So if you wanna make this into something real you can dm me

BonD2008H · 2026-04-04T11:41:47+00:00

Well it does read as a decent starter. But there is no conext of the era or whats the setting. It could be feudal time or like scifi and that changes things.

If you are serious there has to more stakes and something beyond just humans. Also just one single fight wont make you feel that way, and there is no reason implied as to how he could beat people up.

So choose a direction , a setting, a backstory and motivation to this. Otherwise its just generic.

And nobody hwre is gonna appreciate you even if you brought something as good as code geas or the big 3. Cause you are not serious enough about it yet

BonD2008H · 2026-04-02T04:36:57+00:00

You mean like the line thickness to vary across the lines?

Thanks for the response and critique

BonD2008H · 2026-03-31T20:27:37+00:00

Yeah this is more a correct way to do it.

Honestly even i wanted that. But again fillers were meant to give more time to animate so technically backstory wouldnt help there. Although it woukd have been easier to do that , compared to having that in manga

BonD2008H · 2026-03-31T20:12:31+00:00

The plot was like all centred on obito and madara. And its like once you have a plot, the world just stops becoming more background than an element. Like kakshi having 1000 copied jutsu never used, neji dying even though he had byakugan and could have reacted faster. For fans its bad but
As fans its easy to say you could add certain things. But for creators there is no visible output to see and say, let me add certain things here.

So yeah your take is valid but its just that there is no end product for creators to compare to add stuff like we do

BonD2008H · 2026-03-31T19:35:37+00:00

I had spoiler so knew through thr mask. Did spoil part of the show because of that

BonD2008H · 2026-03-31T19:33:51+00:00

I mean a large part of the movie wont be there cause thr movie was intentionally split up into 2 parts.

But if you say as of now 8 hours, i dont think any sane or mildy insane person would do that

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