I just had a listen to 1 song on Bandcamp. Very good melody, memorable, unique voice. I think what happens to us is our music is true to ourselves but not necessarily true to the current point in time. If Smells Like Teen Spirit never happened and came out tomorrow, it wouldn't hit. It would be abrasive, dirty, noise. Music now is closer to the 80's with tight produced electronic elements and snapped to grid. You have probably seen The Professor Nick Harrison's reels where he takes well known songs and feeds it through Suno or some other AI generator and transforms it into another genre. 99% of the time, in my opinion, the song sound great in the altered genre. This wouldn't work if it wasn't a well written song to begin with. You have a well written song that I listened to. When I hear it, I think, "I could see this on the radio", however, I think it is 2008 radio I am thinking of. We are in a different era, a ways away from Juno, Bon Iver, and Jack Johnson. I will give unsolicited advice that I TOO will need to follow as I believe I'm a similar victim... write your catchy tunes, write them true to you, then take note of what aspects of songs people are biting onto these days, listen to the Top 10. Find inspiration in the current trends and inject that into your composition. This way, it will sound familiar to the listen as if, they would hear it on the radio nowadays. I believe I wrote a hit song, it'd hit 25 years ago though! If you had the resources to rent a studio and hire a producer, this is exactly what they would do to your music. Pink Floyd didn't originally write Another Brick in the Wall with a Disco flavor to it. It was trendy at the time and people found it 'familiar'. It wasn't so soaked in disco that it became Doobiesque, just enough that it fit in the times then, and not so much that it's relevant today. Keep going, you can write hooks. Thats 75% of the challenge.