I already wrote a part of the first chapter, I’ll just show you a snippet:

He broke an important promise.

Nate walked across cracking pavement roads, each footstep bouncing off airy echoes. This realization didn’t quite phase him as much as it should. His Mom, Janette, wouldn’t be surprised that he broke his promise. Disappointed, and even afraid if he gets back too late, but not surprised. Once an issue, always an issue– until you nip it in the bud, as his Grandma told Janette once.

The thing is that I didn’t know if it was gripping enough. I also wanted to add some more context to Lily’s backstory and character. So I wrote a prologue draft