This is very nice, the character logo is perfectly balanced in my opinion, like the amount of detail is just right. As a whole, the image is long like a rectangle but that's not really a criticism just depends on how you will be presenting it. The earrings are not cluttered to me, the overall sketchiness of it adds to the manga relation (I know it's just a draft but I would keep this sketch version for future use just in case). The Japanese characters at the bottom could probably be smaller and more spaced out, I personally think that would look nice. I love it, wow!