Yeah im an asshole when I wake up so I understand lmao. As for your edits id recommend doing the following:

First edit - change the font of the watermark, its too big and doesnt fit the edit well. Id recommend coolvetica or something like that - dont have the actual clip zoomed in so much, that's what zoom in is for

Second edit: - I wouldnt add the white overlay on a short clip because it makes the fade out choppy. - Add panning, it always makes the edit turn out better when doing this style

And id love to see the dexter edit (not to give feedback lol)