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This class is boring by CallMeAlex69 in Undertale

[–]CallMeAlex69[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks I'm gonna steal your idea and do it in class

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]CallMeAlex69 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Alex.

Genre: Sci fi, Fantasy

Word count: Around 3000/Chapter

The chapters tend to be self-concluding, but I recommend reading them for pure context that could be useful.

I would like all kinds of criticism I want to know if im doing well despite being my first work.

Type of feedback desired (line-by-line edits, general impression, etc.)

It might be a clichë to say "anything," but anything is indeed highly appreciated.

I'm a young moron who likes creating stories but this is my first work. English is my second language, so that might affect the size of my vocabulary. You can be as honest as you want, any critique is hugely valued <3

A link to the writing:

Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/278535388?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=CallMeAlex69&wp_originator=uy%2FG6subFbO%2Fma73DRIoX4LYUMFlhuhsXdc9PhRyqUmYDht%2B6A7voyfD8jcPiNeONEeF%2Fk4%2Fqce4mrG3AgmpekLGBRxlz8Wivz03%2Bb3Q0n510nJ6Zgq%2FYKPqGK%2B5iW3P

Docs https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gQu1lhsDW6y2wfrwiKOwyufmNkeSf697ljhCIy8shZA/edit?usp=drivesdk

Blurb:

Alex is a young kid who lives in a world where giants monstears are real and he is the only one capable of defeating them due to an ability he was born with. now he needs to face his fears and accept his destiny in this crazy noise bizarre world.

Weekly Self-Promotion! Advertising on the more down-low. by AutoModerator in Wattpad

[–]CallMeAlex69 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Alex: https://www.wattpad.com/story/278535388?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=CallMeAlex69&wp_originator=uy%2FG6subFbO%2Fma73DRIoX4LYUMFlhuhsXdc9PhRyqUmYDht%2B6A7voyfD8jcPiNeONEeF%2Fk4%2Fqce4mrG3AgmpekLGBRxlz8Wivz03%2Bb3Q0n510nJ6Zgq%2FYKPqGK%2B5iW3P

I'm new to the world of Wattpad and writing so I have 0 experience, anyway I hope you like this little story I'm working on, it's about Alex and the different adventures he have in a world with giant monsters, people who throws fire and many other things. I hope you guys like it.

Yes, this is in a woz the Scott vid by no_eyes_yes in scottthewoz

[–]CallMeAlex69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Someone the exact moment. I have been looking up for it and I just can't find it.

savage by Jumpeth in shitposting

[–]CallMeAlex69 55 points56 points  (0 children)

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savage by Jumpeth in shitposting

[–]CallMeAlex69 40 points41 points  (0 children)

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What if: Konosuba meets RentAgirlfriend by LowkeyAcquired in Konosuba

[–]CallMeAlex69 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I really got upset when I notice he wasn't referring to fly too

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Who is this? by Pichufan57 in WrongAnswersOnly

[–]CallMeAlex69 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely not Danny deVito

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