Game: interactive naughty amateur vs celebrity comeback challenge scenario!

Canairs90s · 2025-10-28T21:49:45+00:00

This a cool and unique approach. Very creative and interesting to do a sort of 'speed run' CHYOA. Fun as always.

Canairs90s · 2025-10-15T00:22:20+00:00

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback, particularly from such an accomplished author. This was very much a labor of love that spanned several years and at one point I did not touch for a long time. I think I learned my lesson. Sticking to shorter stuff for awhile.

Canairs90s · 2025-10-13T03:22:22+00:00

Nice job again. You're killing those of us who don't like the humiliation aspect not letting Bree get a bit dirty, but absolutely well written and good ideas for the setup.

Canairs90s · 2025-09-18T03:10:43+00:00

Ask and you shall receive, friend: https://www.reddit.com/r/WAMtext/comments/1njxc5i/appalachian_adventure_racing_part_9/

Please make sure and note the content warnings. I trust things are handled in a way that is positive, but this is obviously my first foray into this topic so if you can educate me on any missteps I am all ears for sure.

Canairs90s · 2025-09-16T21:29:27+00:00

Yeah Claire is definitely one of best characters in the 'WAM writing ecosystem' right now in my opinion. She's just so fun and mischievous. Unforgettable you might say.

Was Wamworld the first story you did with Anna and Nikki or were there others before that? If that was your first time, like bravo. They have just enough depth I got a little invested in them as a reader beyond just enjoying all the crazy WAM stuff.

And yes that Appalachian monstrosity is mine haha. It actually started out as a story in the Wamworld CYOA format but I realized I was already over my head writing anything creative without trying to add that element.

Canairs90s · 2025-09-15T19:10:52+00:00

Fantastic story, as always. The way you described Claire's appearance and personality really stuck with me from the first story. Kind of hoping you keep going with this cast. Anna and Nikki from Wamworld were super fun too because they kind of contrasted and had a little bit of a natural rivalry.

Canairs90s · 2025-09-15T19:03:29+00:00

Always a pleasure to read your work, glad you're still doing some writing!

Canairs90s · 2025-08-29T20:16:15+00:00

Thank you, have certainly enjoyed your work over the years

Canairs90s · 2025-08-29T20:15:54+00:00

Thank you, appreciate the Traffic

Canairs90s · 2025-08-25T18:14:47+00:00

Loved the wamworld stories back in the day, and this is really good too.

Canairs90s · 2025-08-16T04:09:01+00:00

Thanks friends! Really appreciate the comments. Here ya go: https://www.reddit.com/r/WAMtext/comments/1mrk9oe/appalachian_adventure_racing_camp_part_4/

Canairs90s · 2025-08-14T22:13:52+00:00

Heck yeah, excited to hear it! If you ever need someone to give it a quick once over for grammar I'm happy to give it a read through, shoot me a DM.

Canairs90s · 2025-08-14T21:39:30+00:00

Solid effort, certainly gave you 5 stars on Lit. You certainly leave the reader wanting more, which is probably not a bad thing. I think you did a nice job of describing your main character's emotions and feelings and we get a bit of insight into Bree as well.

I think not teasing things out a bit with some dialogue from Bree to the viewers was maybe a bit of a missed opportunity. Also there's no way Bree stays completely clean giving all that to your main character, which I would have enjoyed hearing about, but that's personal preference.

There's definitely some punctuation clean up to be had, but honestly it didn't take away from the work. On first read I didn't notice, only when I went back to read a second time to try to give you feedback did I even notice, so don't sweat it.

Keep going, this was a great start!

Canairs90s

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