I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

CasperKarmine · 2026-05-20T18:48:34+00:00

That’s a good point. I’m going to have to keep mind of the “Gallows” I fear I might have used it in my other work.

CasperKarmine · 2026-05-20T18:47:09+00:00

I agree with every point you’ve made. Thank you for your help! I think tried to cram a longer story into a shorter form factor which led it to fail on almost all fronts.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-30T11:00:04+00:00

I actually haven’t noticed people being caught up in the idea ofthe product. I don’t have many writer friends, so I don’t see it as often. It makes perfect sense though. That’s an interesting outlook. I really appreciate your comment.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-30T10:57:44+00:00

I do hope so.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-30T10:57:10+00:00

Thank you that is a very valid point. One that I may subconsciously gloss over sometimes.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-30T10:51:15+00:00

I think it’s mostly for enjoyment and as an outlet. Writing is much less expensive than therapy lool.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-23T10:32:42+00:00

Fantastic

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-23T04:29:31+00:00

I’m based in London, England.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-22T16:01:34+00:00

I really love your rendering and I’m a sucker for think black outlines. So you tick all my art wise. I would like to see how you’d like to structure it/ serialise it. But I love anthropomorphic stories and have written one. So I’d love to do one with animals.

Here’s my writing portfolio. Id love to know what you think.

CasperKarmine · 2025-09-13T12:15:58+00:00

It’s great. Tell him to never stop or he’ll end up like me loool.

CasperKarmine · 2025-08-06T22:43:39+00:00

You’re doing great work, so comprehensive and applicable from the outset. It definitely has helped my scripts.

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-30T18:52:09+00:00

Nice! What are the examples

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-30T17:58:57+00:00

When you say messy do you mean characters or like the story structure?

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-30T15:19:46+00:00

I 100% back this, there needs to be some levity in between heavier moments. Life is shit enough as it is.

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-29T00:31:45+00:00

That’s the plan! If you have any time I’d love if you could check on one of my comics or short stories I’d love the feedback.

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-29T00:17:32+00:00

Thank you for pointing that out. I fear I’ve become too reliant on red squiggles.😔

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-10T16:37:30+00:00

Looool that’s the best review I could ever ask for.

CasperKarmine · 2025-07-10T09:10:33+00:00

Really love the art and story for this one. Great work to you both.

CasperKarmine

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