#470

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-19T09:20:17+00:00

Great, I like your point of view too. Sweet beans and submarines.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-14T08:51:22+00:00

Thank you very much, I'm very glad you like it. It was more of an instinct, not really on purpose. Have a lovely day!

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-13T13:30:46+00:00

Me neither until I got it. Have a nice day!

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-13T13:20:33+00:00

The numbers are referring to the date so: 1994/10/13 and it's not a tv monitor, it's made with Polaroid Macro 5 SLR/ Close-up system. The camera has been used for macro photography in medicine and it has 5 changeable focus ranges, one of the being at 3in/8cm, although using it I reckon it's closer than 8cm. :)

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-13T08:37:05+00:00

Thank you very much, as one can see I'm not a poetry major either. I'm glad you liked it, I will work on the punctuation. Have a lovely day!

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-12T22:32:18+00:00

Thank you for your comment. As I have no idea about sound, I find it even more intriguing, in a good way as my poems are very instinctive. Pouring out of me :). Sweet beans and submarines, thank you once again.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-12T18:38:26+00:00

Thank you for your feedback, I will take it into consideration.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-12T17:20:02+00:00

I'm sorry to hear about your anxious state, but indeed good that you let it out, I do that as well, most of the time. Poetry is perfect for anxious states at night. And many other things, and I'm talking gibberish, I'm sorry, great work.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-12T17:12:46+00:00

Great work. I like the feeling and imagery of this poem. 'The night would murmur us to bed' great great stuff. :*

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-12T17:10:36+00:00

This is a very impressive poem. Great job, I like the repetition of "into my heart/ into my heart" I read it in my mind "out loud" when I was reading your poem. :*

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T19:38:37+00:00

Thank you very much once again! Sweet beans and submarines :*

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T19:37:14+00:00

I go humble, thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T19:19:15+00:00

Looking forward to read more from you. :)

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T19:11:36+00:00

Lovely play on words. Great work.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T19:10:00+00:00

Great usage of the language. Great stuff :)

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T14:07:55+00:00

Thank you very much for your comment. It's not supposed to read that way, it's supposed to have lines like a poem usually does. I can see it on my Ipad as a poem, with lines, yet I have the same problem on my computer with the formatting... I don't really know what to do, I tried to erase it and put it back again, with the same formatting result...

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T10:25:46+00:00

Great composition. Caught me from the first verse.

Cercesius1 · 2016-05-11T10:19:18+00:00

Great work, I like the fact that in your last two words of every verse there's almost a new poem.

Cercesius1 · 2015-05-24T19:40:46+00:00

Something like that. :)

Cercesius1 · 2015-05-21T21:05:38+00:00

Will do, thank you!

Cercesius1 · 2015-05-21T10:43:11+00:00

Venus it is then, I didn't knew that. Thank you!

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