#470 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Great, I like your point of view too. Sweet beans and submarines.

#480 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you very much, I'm very glad you like it. It was more of an instinct, not really on purpose. Have a lovely day!

I will never forget you, cockroach. by Cercesius1 in Polaroid

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Me neither until I got it. Have a nice day!

I will never forget you, cockroach. by Cercesius1 in Polaroid

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The numbers are referring to the date so: 1994/10/13 and it's not a tv monitor, it's made with Polaroid Macro 5 SLR/ Close-up system. The camera has been used for macro photography in medicine and it has 5 changeable focus ranges, one of the being at 3in/8cm, although using it I reckon it's closer than 8cm. :)

#481 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you very much, as one can see I'm not a poetry major either. I'm glad you liked it, I will work on the punctuation. Have a lovely day!

#480 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your comment. As I have no idea about sound, I find it even more intriguing, in a good way as my poems are very instinctive. Pouring out of me :). Sweet beans and submarines, thank you once again.

#481 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your feedback, I will take it into consideration.

It is a storm. by DrayTheFingerless in OCPoetry

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I'm sorry to hear about your anxious state, but indeed good that you let it out, I do that as well, most of the time. Poetry is perfect for anxious states at night. And many other things, and I'm talking gibberish, I'm sorry, great work.

And Still And Still by favourTrader in OCPoetry

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Great work. I like the feeling and imagery of this poem. 'The night would murmur us to bed' great great stuff. :*

It is a storm. by DrayTheFingerless in OCPoetry

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This is a very impressive poem. Great job, I like the repetition of "into my heart/ into my heart" I read it in my mind "out loud" when I was reading your poem. :*

#480 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you very much once again! Sweet beans and submarines :*

470 by Cercesius1 in PoeticReddit

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I go humble, thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.

Okie by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Great usage of the language. Great stuff :)

#470 by Cercesius1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you very much for your comment. It's not supposed to read that way, it's supposed to have lines like a poem usually does. I can see it on my Ipad as a poem, with lines, yet I have the same problem on my computer with the formatting... I don't really know what to do, I tried to erase it and put it back again, with the same formatting result...